Corrections · 2
1.제 이름은 Mumu입니다,저는 중국 사람입니다。
=> 제 이름은 Mumum 에요. 저는 중국 사람이에요.
or
저는 mumu 라고 하고, 중국 사람이에요. << I made it one sentense.
2.저는 매일 아침 6시에 일어납니다。6시 반 회사에 출근합니다。
=> 저는 매일 아침 6시에 일어나고 6시 반에 회사에 출근해요.
3.7시부터 9시까지 회사에서 혼자 한국어를 배웁니다。
=> 오후 7시부터 9시까지 회사에서 혼자 한국어를 배워요.
4.한국어 공부를 재미이지만 어려워요。
=> 한국어 공부가 재미있지만 어려워요. or 한국어 공부가 재밌지만 어려워요.
재미있지만 / 재밌지만 is same.
5.제가 한국어를 열심히 공부하겠습니다。
=> 한국어 열심히 공부할게요. :)
dont' put the "제가" you can. but we korean usually don't put "I" in the sentenses.
well done! all of the sensenses are grammatically right.
I guess maybe your Korean book teaching you a formal sentenses.
that's why all your sentenses are ended with 다.
but if you are not learning Korean for business. I would recommend you that
use a form a with "요."
because ended with "요" is also formal way to say. but it's better to say people.
ended with "다" would be good for business and newspaper.
so I tried to correct all your sentenses with "요"
you don't have any problem with grammar and vocabulary.
just want to make it bit more natural and general situation.
Great. I think you chose right way to learn Korean.
keep it up!
notice:
1. 。<< not . << yes
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