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Old Songs I was about to write my diary while my roommate Chan was humming an old song , which reminds me of those old days I was young and naive. The first English song I listened was 'In the end' sung by Linkin Park. It happened when I was 10 years old (2005) that a pretty good-looking junior student showed me the song. Maybe that handsome guy's recommendation made the song even more charming to me, I thought that the rap was utterly cool anyway. Thus, I came to a CD chain shop (used to attract a lot of customers) and brought their cd for the first time. Then I started to listen songs sung by Avril, Beyonce, Enimem, Sum41 and so on. Nowadays, I nearly listen that type of songs. Instead, I adore Shawn Mendes and Sia(In fact I adore numerous singers (♥◠‿◠)ノ). However, it always contains those most unforgettable memories when I was a little girl, dreaming and wondering.

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Actually I have nothing to correct your writing. Even my English is not good. Anyway I really enjoy reading your article. keep writing! soon you goon na write amazing!
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Old Songs

I was about to write my diary while my roommate Chan was humming an old song , which reminds me of those old days I was young and naive. The first English song I listened was 'In the end' sung by Linkin Park. It happened when I was 10 years old (2005) that a pretty good-looking junior student showed me the song. Maybe that handsome guy's recommendation made the song even more charming to me, I thought that the rap was utterly cool anyway. Thus, I came to a CD chain shop (that used to attract a lot of customers) and bought their CD for the first time.
Then I started to listen to songs sung by Avril, Beyonce, Enimem, Sum41 and so on.
Nowadays, I barely listen that type of songs. Instead, I adore Shawn Mendes and Sia(In fact I adore numerous singers (♥◠‿◠)ノ).
However, it (a little unclear what "it" is) always contains those most unforgettable memories of/from when I was a little girl, dreaming and wondering.


English is my second language so I might have missed something, but I've been speaking it since I was little so I hope this was useful! Very well written by the way:)

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