[Day 03] Dear Diary.

I'm gonna write a short diary every day :)
It's my first challenge myself. So please help me with it.
If there are any mistakes, feel free to correct :)

1. It is my first challenge to myself.

Finally! I had an English interview. It really challenged myself but I did it!
I'm proud of myself eventhough I did not that good.

2. typo - even though; . . . I did not do that well.

This is a script for my self introduction.

Before we start, I am honored to be here for this interview today. I graduated from Sogang University with a degree in Business Administration. I have strong background in marketing both educationally and professionally. My major was really project-oriented, so I spent an enormous amount of time looking at marketing cases, talking about them, and criticizing them. Also, I have worked in the advertising and PR industry about an year.
So, I was able to gain a better understanding of all the areas in it. That’s why I can say I’m really fit for a marketing position.
a year
OMG I hope this script is enough for self introduction. I think I need to add something more.

This reads very smoothly.  I think it is very, very well done.  I like it.  It would make an employer want to meet you.

[Day 03] Dear Diary.

I'm going to write a short diary entry everyday :)
It's my first challenge to myself. So please help me with it.
If there are any mistakes, feel free to correct them :)

1.

Finally I had an English interview. It really challenged me but I did it!  (myself is seldom used in English)
I'm proud of myself even though I did not do that well. (but it makes sense here) (well/good check rules)

2.

This is a script to introduce me.

Before we start, I am honored to be here for this interview today. I graduated from Sogang University with a degree in Business Administration. I have a strong background in marketing both educationally and professionally. My major was project-oriented, so I spent an enormous amount of time looking at marketing cases, talking about them and criticising them. I also have worked in the advertising and PR industry for about a year. (an/a rules check).  So, I was able to gain a better understanding of all the areas. That’s why I can say I’m a really good fit for a marketing position. (Don't start a paragraph with so)

OMG I hope this script is enough for self introduction. I think I need to add something more. (OMG is not a word, certainly using it in an introduction makes you sound about 10 ;-)

[Day 03] Dear Diary.

I'm gonna write a short diary every day :)
It's my first challenge myself. So please help me with it.
If there are any mistakes, feel free to correct :)

1.

Finally! I had an English interview. It really challenged myself but I did it!
I'm proud of myself eventhough I did not that good.

2.

This is a script for my self introduction.

Before we start, I am honored to be here for this interview today. I graduated from Sogang University with a degree in Business Administration. I have strong background in marketing both educationally and professionally. My major was really project-oriented, so I spent an enormous amount of time looking at marketing cases, talking about them, and criticizing them. Also, I have worked in the advertising and PR industry about an year.
So, I was able to gain a better understanding of all the areas in it. That’s why I can say I’m really fit for a marketing position.

OMG I hope this script is enough for self introduction. I think I need to add something more.