Curry
Yesterday, my daughter and I went to a curry restaurant. My daughter likes the restaurant. We ate some kinds of curry and naan. Those were delicious! But the naan was too big(about 50cm length) for me, so I took out the rest of half naan. We ate that after dinner. My son seemed to like that. I'll go there next time with my son, too.
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Going Out for Curry
Yesterday, my daughter and I went to a curry restaurant. My daughter likes the* restaurant. We ate some** several kinds of curry and naan. Those They were delicious! But the naan was too big(about 50cm in diameter length***) for me, so I took out the rest of half of the naan home. We ate that after dinner. My son seemed to like that. I'll go there next time with my son, too.Awesome. すごい！今は空腹です。
* You can also say "My daughter likes this restaurant." It has the same meaning, but makes the rhythm more natural.
** "some kinds" or "several kinds" - "Some kinds sounds too vague. It's better to say "we ate a few kinds of curry"(a few = 2 or 3) or "we ate several kinds" (several = 3 or more).
*** 50 cm?!? That's huge. Instead of length it's better to say "50 cm in diameter" or "50 cm across." It was fifty cm across? Or fifty cm around? 50cm is more than one and a half feet.
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Curry
Yesterday, my daughter and I went to a curry restaurant. My daughter likes the restaurant. We ate some kinds of curry and naan. They were delicious! But the naan was too big(about 50cm in length) for me, so I took out the remaining half of the naan. We ate it for dinner. My son seemed to like it. I'll go there next time with my son, too.Want to progress faster?
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