My favorite tennis players
My favorite tennis player is Andy Murray. Expect his technique,his personality attract me too. He is so emotive. Unlike Roger Federer,who is always poker-faced,Murray write all his feelings on his face. When he win,he shout and laugh ,when he lose, he cry. He say what he want to sad,even if it's so dumb. But that's him, it's so reality. Keep it real ,Murray . I am glad that I like you just in the time which you have the best condition.
I also like Nishikori Kei. Some people don't like him, because he is a Japanese . But I don't care a player's nationality. Oh ,by the way, he even don't have a house in Japan .
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My Favorite Tennis Players
My favorite tennis player is Andy Murray. Besides his technique, his personality attracts me too. He is so emotional. Unlike Roger Federer, who is almost always poker-faced, Murray wears all his feelings on his face. When he wins, he shouts and laughs, when he loses, he cries. He says what he wants to say, even if it sounds dumb. But that's him, it's so sincere. Keep it real, Andy! I am glad that I like you and can watch you play during the time when your game is in its best condition. I also like Kei Nishikori. Some people don't like him, because he is Japanese. I, personally, don't care about a player's nationality. Oh, by the way, a little known fact - he doesn't even have a house in Japan!Good job! I reworded a few of your sentences to make them sound more natural to my "native" ears, but easily understood every idea that you were trying to tell me as the reader. Pay more attention to your punctuation, subject-verb agreement, and sentence construction. As to the latter, perhaps, reading in English (newspaper, magazine, etc.) will help your comprehension. I agree, Murray is playing well right now, but I still think Fed would beat him if he could magically be back in his prime. Kei needs to smooth out his service motion in order to win an easy point or two there as Murray is now doing. 2017 should be interesting! I hope this helps you. J.
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I wholeheartedly agree with you. Andy Murray is one of my tennis heroes. He won Wimbledon this year for the second time. It is a huge (British) Scottish achievement! I also like him because he doesn't hide his feelings. He is very driven (determined to succeed).
The British media like Federer because he's always polite in TV interviews. I think he's fake and smarmy.
Nishikori Kei is a talented tennis-player. I also love to watch Nick Kyrgios on court because he is such a crazy character! He's a roller-coaster of emotions!
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