Explaining to reason why I'd like to apprentice?
Hi guys, I want to be volunteer a place and owner want to me to write 'Explaining to reason why you'd like to apprentice?'. She is very nice lady, I don't want to be formal. Could you check it for me, please? :) Thank youu!!
Hi T,
Today I visited your place and I told her( I am sorry she didn't say her name) about volunteer program.
My name is Nimet N---- and I graduated from Istanbul University Faculty of Pharmacy in this Jun. I have spent for my last 4 years involve nature. I am passion about nature and all naturel product. I don't want to give people synthetic chemicals. That's why I am on focus on natural medicine. I heart that Canada is the best place to learn about naturel medicine then I decided to come Canada. Firstly I was a volunter ecological farm in Vancouver but that farm is growing food stuf. I love to touch earth, I love being gardener and I learned lots of things from this farm, I appriciate that. But I am trying to built my way that conbine healing and growing. Than I came Toronto and started to looking school about herbal medicine. I studied 3 weeks in Cheniese Herbal Medicine. Then we learned to goverment change some rules about study permit. I must to go out of Canada to apply study permit. And lots of new things and expenses. And also schools are more expensive if you are international student. Shortly, I drop out to school cause financial issues. I am planning to stay Toronto 2 3 weeks. Because I have an exam in İstanbul 12 November. I can come whole weeks and whole day. My purpouse of applying apprentice :
- İmprove language skill
- Getting more knowledge about natural product and keep informed about workshops, events etc
- Spent time people who same mentallity as me
- I like to helping other people
I atteched my resume and my photo on this email.
I will come there for workshop tomorrow. If you want, I can come earlier.
I am waiting your respound.
My Best,
Nimet
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Today I visited your place and I told her( I am sorry she didn't say her name) [not sure what you want to say here] about volunteer program.
My name is Nimet N---- and I graduated from the Istanbul University Faculty of Pharmacy in this June. I have spent for my the last 4 years involved in nature. I am passionate about nature and all naturalel products. I don't want to give people synthetic chemicals. That's why I am on focused on natural medicine. I heart that Canada is the best place to learn about naturalel medicine then so I decided to come to Canada. Firstly I was a volunteer in an ecological farm in Vancouver but that farm is growing food stuf. I love to touch earth, I love being a gardener and I learned lots of things from this farm, I appreiciate that. But I am trying to buildt my way that comnbines healing and growing. Thean I came to Toronto and started to looking for a school about herbal medicine school. I studied 3 weeks in Cheniese Herbal Medicine for 3 weeks. Then we learned to the government changed some rules about study permit. I must to go out of Canada to apply for a study permit. And lots of new things and expenses. And also schools are more expensive if you are an international student.
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Explaining to reason why I'd like to apprentice?
Hi guys, I want to be volunteer a place and owner want to me to write 'Explaining to reason why you'd like to apprentice?'. She is very nice lady, I don't want to be formal. Could you check it for me, please? :) Thank youu!!Hi Tracey,
My name is Nimet N, and I graduated from Istanbul University Faculty of Pharmacy this past June. I have spent for my last 4 years involve nature - I don't know what you're trying to say here.. I am passionate about nature and all natural products. I don't want to give people synthetic products. That's why I am on focused on natural medicine. I heard that Canada is the best place to learn about natural medicine, so I decided to come Canada. First I was a volunteer at an ecological farm in Vancouver, where they grow food. I love to touch earth, I love gardening and I learned lots of things from the farm. But I am trying to learn combine healing and growing. Then I came Toronto and started to look for schools of herbal medicine. I studied 3 weeks in a Chinese Herbal Medicine program. Then I learned that the government had changed some rules about study permits. I must leave Canada to apply for a study permit. There are lots of new things and expenses. Also, schools are more expensive if you are an international student. I am planning to stay in Toronto for 2-3 weeks .I can come any day or time. The purpose of my applying to volunteer is to:
- improve my language skills
- gain more knowledge about natural products and keep informed about workshops, events etc
- spend time people who have the same mentallity as me
I have attached my resume and my photo to this email.
I am coming to the workshop tomorrow. If you want, I can come earlier.
I am waiting your response,
My Best,
Nimet
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Shortly, I might need to drop out to of school cause due to financial issues. I am planning to stay in Toronto 2 to 3 more weeks. Because as I have an exam in İstanbul on 12 November. I can come every day all day for my remaining time in Toronto whole weeks and whole day. My purpouse of reasons for applying to this apprenticeship are:
- Getting more knowledge about natural products and keep staying informed about workshops, events etc
- Spendingt time with people who have the same mentallity as me
- I like to helping other people
I atteched my resume and my photo on this email.
I will come there for a workshop tomorrow. If you want, I can will come earlier so that we can discuss my application.
I am waiting your respound.
My Best,
Nimet
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