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Hello from Mongolia!
Today, I flew from Japan to Mongolia* with 4 other members (of my team / my office) and I'm (we are?) staying in the Kempinski hotel. Tomorrow, we will interview candidates for our Mongolian office. We are now establishing an office there as I had wrote / had written / mentioned in a previous notebook.
And, we are planning to establish offices in some other countries as well, such as Cambodia, Sri Lanka, America, the Philippines, and so on. The offices will be for engineering, mainly, the building of computer software.** These offices will enable engineers to easily move to whichever country the engineers want to go.
So, in this manner, engineers can improve their skills globally and have the opportunity to work on many types of projects.
Good job! It sounds like a very interesting project to be involved with. Best of luck! As to the English, do not forget to use articles (a, an, the). For events / things which happen in the future, use will. I hope this helps you. J.
*There is no country named “Mongol” - That term refers to the people or their language.
**Software is a mass noun / non-countable noun so there is no need to add an “s” to it.
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