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2016.10.22 For a while, I play the role of a Psychologist to my friend , but I'm not professional, so I fall in the bad mood, and I know I can't help her a lot. I need a own space and talked with myself to remove the bad mood. So I try write English diary here and promote my English ability. 有一段時間,我為我的朋友扮演著心理醫師的角色,但我並非專業,所以她的負面情緒也直接的影響到我,我知道我無法繼續幫助她更多。我需要自己的空間,並與自己對話來排解這些負面情緒。所以我在這裡試著寫英文日記,順便提升我的英文能力。

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2016.10.22

For a while, I had played the role of a psychologist to my friend, but I'm not a professional, so I fell into a bad mood since I knew that I can't help her a lot. I needed my own space and managed to figure some things out in my own mind which removed my bad mood. So now, I am trying to write an English diary here to promote my ability in English.

Good job! Keep writing and keep posting since the process will keep you busy and your mind occupied.. Learning more vocabulary and sentence structure will allow you to express your thoughts better and more clearly. I hope this helps you. Best of luck! J.

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2016.10.22

For a while, I played the role of a therapist to my friend even though I was not a professional. I fell into the bad mood because I knew I couldn't help her much. I needed my own space and I talked to myself to get rid of my bad mood. I'm writing this diary entry here to improve my English.

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