check my sentenses sentences and fix please~~~

1)
a: how did you get fired?
b: I was late for work a few times. I think getting up at 4 a.m doesn't fit (suit) me.(새벽 네시에 일어나는 것은 나한테 안 맞는거 같애)
a: Right. That's way too early to get up at 4 a.m. Next time, find another good a job with a more suitable work schedule!
b: Ha,,, I will. Speaking of which, I have to hurry, or I'm late for an interview.

2)
a: Excuse me. Is this Minsu's phone number?
b: Yes, Who's the calling please?
a: Minsu! It's me James! Long time no see! Long time no speak!
b: James? I know you emigrated but how did you get my phone number?
a: I got your number through from a mutual 'Facebook' friend/on Facebook

3)
a: How did you figure it out? [since you do not say how you figured it out and my father is a lawyer does not answer the question, then cut this stuff. it's just rambling non-sense)
b: My father helped me. He is a lawyer.
a: what a relief !

4)
a: How was your day?
b: I haven't eaten all day and I have no energy.
a: Can I get you something to eat?
b: No thanks, I have to see a doctor tomorrow. He told me not to eat anything for 24 hours.

5)
a: How is the salmon?
b: It's the best salmon I've ever tasted!
a: Let's come here again to on your next birthday.
b: Good idea.