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Walking with the friend Today, I and my friend walked through Wuhan Yangtze River Bridge. It spent an hour. We took many beautiful photos. The city become more beautiful and attract people to visit and settle down. I witness its change. I'm pround of my city , my hometown .

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the city becomes ( we should add (s)) and attracts(we  add (s)), and you should say I'm proud of my city (not pround )!!
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Walking with the friend

Today, I and my friend walked through Wuhan Yangtze River Bridge. It spent an hour. We took many beautiful photos.
The city become more beautiful and attract people to visit and settle down. I witness its change.
I'm pround of my city , my hometown .


Hi Ayuan.

1. Today, my friend and I (it is customary to include "I" last, ex: You and I should leave ... , My mother and I went ...)

2.a. walked around Wuhan Bridge (means in the general area of the bridge).

2.b. walked to Wuhan Bridge (means that Wuhan Bridge was the destination)

3. It took an hour, or,  we spent an hour walking ...

4. The city has become more beautiful and attracts people. I have witnessed its change.

5. I'm proud (just a spelling typo)

Good work :)







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