Ten-day trip in Shanghai
About three years ago, I went to Shanghai with my best friend, Nick. We have known each other since we were elementary student. Both of us had represented our college to take part in the ten-day international camp at Fudan University. We had classes and meals with local students during the previous seven days. I found that the students in China prefer to major in economics than medicine. However, many distinguished students prefer to choose medicine rather than economic just because doctors’ beginning wages is higher than any others position in Taiwan.
In our last few days, we hung out with students of Fudan, took maglev train, and visited the Oriental Pearl Tower. The tall transparent floor we lay on was impressive and scary. I am not fond of the traffic jam and rude local people shouting around the street. Nevertheless, Chinese art craft like papercutting and calligraphy were visible everywhere and it was awesome. Writing a poem using Chinese names is another popular traditional activity.
Last but not least, I was surprised that Nick got a girlfriend after the ten-day trip. And the girl is one of our group members. Due to their relationship, we can keep in touch with each other until now. Well done, Nick.
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Ten-day trip in Shanghai
About three years ago, I went to Shanghai with my best friend, Nick. We have known each other since we were elementary students. Both of us had were representing our college to take part in a ten-day international camp at Fudan University. We had classes and meals with local students during the previous seven days. I found that the students in China prefer to major in economics more than medicine. However, many distinguished students prefer to choose medicine rather than economic just because doctors’ beginning wages is higher than any others position in Taiwan.In our few days, we hung out with students of Fudan, took maglev train, and visited the Oriental Pearl Tower. The tall transparent floor we lay on was impressive and scary. I was not fond of the traffic jam and rude local people shouting around the street. Nevertheless, Chinese art craft like papercutting and calligraphy were visible everywhere and it was awesome. Writing a poem using Chinese names is another popular traditional activity.
Last but not least, I was surprised that Nick got a girlfriend after the ten-day trip. And the girl is one of our group members. Due to their relationship, we kept in touch with each other until now. Well done, Nick.
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