My favorite star
Today I am going to tell you about my favorite idol group.This group is very famous for song and his face.And this group's fan name is army.This group name is BTS!!I love this group very much.
BTS's song is very good.I recommend BTS's song.I recommend 'wings'.This is lately album.
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My favorite star
Today I am going to tell you about my favorite idol group. This group is very famous for its songs and his the beautiful faces of its members. And tThis group's fan name is army. This group's official name is BTS!! I love this group very much.BTS's songs is are very good. I recommend BTS's songs. I recommend 'wings'. This is lately their most recent album.
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