尊敬的X您好:

Chinese letters are even fussier than English in terms of "proper" ettiquette in reflecting the social positions of the reader and writer.  I am only translating your letter and not teaching you the intricate details in writing a formal Chinese letter.  I am not on par. Best if you consult someone who is a specialist.  Care must be taken to the place you are writing to.  There are differences to whom you write to in Mainland China, Taiwan, or Hong Kong.

情愛的X 先生/女士，What you are saying is "My beloved"!  There is no "dear" salutation in Chinese. If you must use something, then use 尊敬的X先生

您好， You don't need these sort of superfluous stuff. 我叫 This is a formal letter hence the language used must be formal.  是/的名是Rami Chaouki,  我最近在是刚刚从麥基爾大學畢業了得取得心理學的业專業生的學士學位。此信是关我想 在临床心理学与心理諮询聯絡您的原因是因爲我想做跟心理學有關的方面求业生涯，因此我要跟您面試一下，看您的經驗和眼光是怎麽樣的。希望能得垂青以取一面试.

我的电信地址: email@address

谢谢您的时间

此致
敬礼

Your signature

Your full name in print.

如果您願意的話，請加我的Skype用戶名“XXXX”而給我你有空的時間。
謝謝您的幫助！
Rami

This is a formal letter, your use of informal English will land your letter in the rubbish bin.  At the same time you need to write like a professional and not like a dear old friend.

Dear Mr. X,
My name is Rami Chaouki.  I am a recent Bachelors of Arts Graduate from McGill University.  My major is in psychology. I’m am contacting you today This reason for this letter is because I am interested in pursuing a career in the field of counselling/clinical psychology and counseling.   I look forward for an interview.  ’d love to conduct an informational interview with you to learn from your professional experience.

I can be contacted at Email@Address.  A Skype information is inappropriate.  A phone number or email address is most appropriate.

If you are interested, please add my Skype account “XXXX” and let me know when you’d be available. You are looking for a job from him and not the other way round.  Your use of language is high and mighty and no one will want to hire you.

Thank you very much for your time, and I look forwards  to our meeting hearing from you soon!

Best wishes, Sincerely,
Rami YOUR LAST NAME  You are not his friend.

How to Write an Informational Interview Request (Is the translation OK?)

情愛的X，
您好，我叫Rami Chaouki。 我最近在麥基爾大學畢業了取得心理學專業的學士學位。我聯絡您的原因是因爲我想做跟心理學有關的生涯，因此我要跟您面試一下，看您的經驗和眼光是怎麽樣的。
如果您願意的話，請加我的Skype用戶名“XXXX”而給我你有空的時間。
謝謝您的幫助！
Rami