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Internet disadvantages The breakthrough that the Internet has made in different fields in our life is undeniable. It ,admittedly, made most of our communications faster and easier than before with subsequent changes in the global economy. Nevertheless, people have different views regarding its benefits and drawbacks. They still wonder whether these evolutionary changes are bless or curse on our world. Personally, I totally believe that the cyber applications has advantages much more than the disadvantages.In fact, the advantages of Internet applications and uses ,that people have witnessed over the last three decades, are many.the most eminent benefit was the in the field of communications. Instead of waiting for days or weeks to have your mail received, people could, nowadays, send emails in minutes . Moreover, it made people communication,world wide, faster and cheaper than before. These improvements have its positive impact on global economy. Trading processes in the form of contracting , online payments and purchasing become more instant and feasible than before. Subsequently, marked improvement in global business. Eventually, the Internet-based communications and global businesses are ,undoubtedly, positive ,tangible changes.On the other hand, there are many undeniable drawbacks to the rapid change in global communications and commercial transactions. These negative changes are the reason behind the notoriety of cyber-based activities. Firstly, cyber bullying tha,unfortunately, a widespread new type of crimes that emerged as a consequence to the easiness of global communications. Secondly, cyber fraud that stands as one of the biggest challenges and problems that faces both purchaser and merchants online. However, these new crimes that emerged with technological advances and Tele communications don't justify any claim that disadvantages outweigh the advantages.To sum up, the rapid growth in the field of e.commerce and telecommunications are undeniable ,even though, the drawbacks that people suffer from. In general, the advantages, in my opinion, ar6e far more than the disadvantages.

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Internet disadvantages

The breakthrough that the Internet has made in different fields in our life is undeniable. It has admittedly made most of our communications faster and easier than before with subsequent changes in the global economy. Nevertheless, people have different views regarding its benefits and drawbacks. They still wonder whether these evolutionary changes are a blessing or curse on our world. Personally, I truly believe that the cyber applications have  much more advantages than the disadvantages.In fact, the advantages of Internet applications and uses that people have witnessed over the last three decades, are many. The most eminent benefit was the in the field of communications. Instead of waiting for days or weeks to have your mail received, people can, nowadays, send emails in minutes . Moreover, it made people worldwide communication faster and cheaper than before. These improvements have a positive impact on the global economy. Trading processes in the form of contracting , online payments and purchasing have become more instantaneous and more feasible than before. Subsequently, there is a marked improvement in global business. Eventually, the Internet-based communications and global businesses are undoubtedly positive ,tangible changes.On the other hand, there are many undeniable drawbacks to the rapid change in global communications and commercial transactions. These negative changes are the reason behind the notoriety of cyber-based activities. Firstly, cyber bullying that is unfortunately a widespread new type of crime that has emerged as a consequence of the ease of global communications. Secondly, cyber fraud that stands as one of the biggest challenges and problems that faces both purchaser and merchants online. However, these new crimes that have emerged with technological advances and Telecommunications don't justify any claim that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.To sum up, the rapid growth in the field of e-commerce and telecommunications are undeniable , despite the drawbacks that people suffer from. In general, the advantages, in my opinion, are far more than the disadvantages.


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