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Drink Story Drink I got up at 6’O clock in the morning. I brushed my teeth after that I drank 2 glasses of water in an empty stomach. I think it is better for maintaining a healthy body. I had a bath and I got dressed. I made tea with milk. While drinking tea I turned on my mobile and checked my Facebook & WhatsApp. Normally on a Friday, I call my friends for drinking tea in morning. There are 3 rooms in our Flat. Today, by morning at 9’ Clock, I had been waiting for ½ an hour for serving tea to them. I was busy as I have been preparing notes for the class at 3’ clock in the evening. I couldn’t wait for them and I left the room. We like the drinks such as butter milk & other healthy juice using by special herbs. One of my friends, who likes alcohol, once, drunk too much in a party. But I don’t like alcohol. I have a short story about the drinks. Long back when I had been working in a Company there were lot of friends had stayed with me in a villa. One some special day, all of them got drunk. I wasn’t in the room that moment. They had planned to drink with me and filled liquor in Pepsi bottle instead of Pepsi. When I had reached the room one of my friends invited me to drink the Pepsi which was mixed with liquor. But that time I didn’t know it was liquor. But suddenly I noticed his face’s expression and I denied the drink invitation very politely. All of them reached in my room and again invited me to drink. I replied to them quietly I haven’t drink alcohol in my life. I had pledged to my parents & teacher that I will not drink in my life and I do believe that non-alcoholic life is better for our society. All were listening my words as I expressed my opinion I will not drink ,you may drink as you have to decide whatever it is good or bad but don’t insist to me to drink with you. I was very polite with them and in one moment I saw the silence during their celebration. One of my best friend loudly announced we won’t drink in this villa in future and one who likes the drink as alcohol can go outside of the villa confidentially. I am still remembering that incident and I feel proud of them as they accepted me as a best friend.

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Nice story. It's not alway usual that people respect others in regards to their decisions about not drinking. That's great they respected you and your decision.
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All of them reached in came to my room and again invited me to drink. I replied to them quietly I haven’t drink drunk alcohol in my life. I had pledged to my parents & teacher that I will would not drink in my life and I do believe that a non-alcoholic life is better for our society. All were Everyone was listening to my words as I expressed my opinion that I will would not drink, "you may drink as you have to decided whatever whether it is good or bad but don’t insist to me to drink with you. I was very polite with them and in one moment I saw the heard silence during their celebration. One of my best friends loudly announced that we won’t drink in this villa in future and anyone who likes the drink as alcohol can go outside of the villa confidentially. 

I am still remember that incident and I feel proud of them as they accepted me as a best friend.

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We like the drinks such as butter milk & other healthy juices using by with special herbs. 

One of my friends, who likes alcohol, once, drunk too much in/at a party. But I don’t like alcohol. 

I have a short story about the drinks drinking. Long ago back when I had been working in a company there were lot of friends had who stayed with me in a villa. One some special day, all of them got drunk. I wasn’t in the room at that moment. They had planned to drink with me and filled liquor in a Pepsi bottle instead of Pepsi. When I had reached the room one of my friends invited me to drink the Pepsi which was mixed with liquor. But that time I didn’t know it was liquor. But suddenly I noticed his face’s expression and I denied the drink invitation very politely. 


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Drink Story

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I got up at 6 o'clock in the morning. I brushed my teeth, after that I drank 2 glasses of water in on an empty stomach. I think it is better for maintaining a healthy body. I had a bath and I got dressed.
I made tea with milk. While drinking the/my tea I turned on my mobile and checked my Facebook & WhatsApp.
Normally on a Friday, I call my friends for drinking to drink tea in the morning. There are 3 rooms in our Flat. Today, by morning at 9am, I had been waiting for ½ an hour for serving to serve tea to them. I was busy as I have had been preparing notes for the my class at 3 o'clock in the evening afternoon. I couldn’t wait for them and I left the room.

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