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天气在以色列 大家好， 我想说话关于天气。 我住在以色列， 和这时间是往结束夏季。 已比以前更冷。 Here is what I tried to say: Hello everyone, I want to talk about the weather. I live in Israel, and it's now toward the end of the summer. It's already colder than before.

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天气在以色列

大家好，

我想关于天气说几句。
我住在以色列，现在夏天快要结束了。
现在比以前更冷了。


Here is what I tried to say:

Hello everyone,
I want to talk about the weather.
I live in Israel, and it's now toward the end of the summer.
It's already colder than before.
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以色列的天气  （The weather "of" Israel )
在以色列的天气 （The weather in Israel)

The expression of possession 的(de) is heavily used in Chinese and sounds more natural.


大家好，


今天我想谈天气。

("about/regarding to/on" is not always required in Chinese, "我想谈关于..."  "我想谈..." "我想谈谈..." "我想谈谈关于..." "我想说说..." "我想说说关于" are all the same )

我住在以色列， 现在已经接近夏天的尾声。

(just another choice of expression)

  1. wěishēng
    ①南曲、北曲的套曲中的最后一支曲子；每出戏结束时用唢呐吹奏的曲牌。
    ②大型乐曲中乐章的最后一部分。
    ③文学作品的结局部分。
    ④指某项活动快要结束的阶段：会谈接近～。


比起以前冷多了。It's  colder than before.

(虽然夏天还没结束) 已经很冷了。(Even though it's still summer) It's already very cold.

虽然夏天还没结束，却已经很冷了，而且比以前还冷。(Even though it is still summer, it is already very cold now and colder than before.)

To be honest, I don't understand "already colder than before". It sounds weird in both Chinese and English.

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以色列的天气

大家好，

我想说说天气。
我住在以色列， 这个时候差不多夏季快结束了。
已经越来越冷了。


Here is what I tried to say:

Hello everyone,
I want to talk about the weather.
I live in Israel, and it's now toward the end of the summer.
It's already colder than before.
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天气在以色列

大家好，

我想说关于天气。
我住在以色列， 和这时间是往结束夏季(现在夏天快要过去了)。
已比以前更冷(了)。


Here is what I tried to say:

Hello everyone,
I want to talk about the weather.
I live in Israel, and it's now toward the end of the summer.
It's already colder than before.

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