The Stranger. Part 2. The first thunder. Please, correct my mistakes.
Damien goes on to stay on Druid's Island... Present tense.
So I begin to ran to the nearby settlemen every week. Today is the first time I go there. (today I go there at the first time?).Lisa told me that I wouldn't go astray if I would follow the path. Every time I do it I have a task to send any subject there. So this moment I'm moving on the path across the forest. Some stranger is stopping me standing on the middle of the footpath.
"Good day, guy! I know you have to deliver something to the Wood Town. I came from there to meet you ang give this thing."
"No one told me about that. So piss off, please."
"I must to do it"
"Let's start..."
My wiev starts to corrupt, everything that I see is going slowly...
"Damien, wake up!" Lisa said.
"What happened? Was it just a dream?"
"No, you was faced with an enemy agent. I'm glad you opened your eyes. You've been slept for 2 days."
"Have I sent the tech subject? I don't remember anything."
"Yeah, you've done it".
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The Stranger. Part 2. The first thunder. Please, correct my mistakes.
Damien goes on to stay on Druid's Island... Present tense.So I begin to ran run to the nearby settlement every week. Today is the first time I go there. (today I go there at the first time?) Today I am going there or the first time.Lisa told tells me that I wouldn't won't/will not go astray if I would follow the path. Every time I do it I have a task to send any to a subject there. So this moment I'm moving on walking/running on the path across the forest. Some stranger is stopping me standing on the middle of the footpath stops me.
"Good day, guy sir*! I know you have to deliver something to the Wood Town. I came from there to meet you ang and give this thing."
"No one told me about that. So piss off*, please."
"I must to do it."
"Let's start..."
My wiev vision?* starts to corrupt blur, everything that I see is slowly going slowly...
"Damien, wake up!" Lisa said.
"What happened? Was it just a dream?"
"No, you was faced with an enemy agent. I'm glad you opened your eyes. You've been asleep slept for 2 days."
"Have I sent the tech subject*? I don't remember anything."
"Yeah, you've done it".
*good day is rather formal, guy is very casual
*you probably now that this is rather rude.
*wiev is not a word in English. From context, I'm guessing you mean he's slowly unable to see? Usually the phrase is his vision blurs.
*I'm not sure what you mean by tech subject.
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