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Un jour dans sur la route
Aujourd'hui, j'étais à Evitamiento - au niveau de Caquetá, où je prends toujours le bus - sans embouteillages. Cependeant, j'étais assis dans le métro et j'avais une heure / assez de temps pour arriver à l'université, assez de temps. Aujourd'hui Evitamiento était sans embouteillages, mais j'ai decidé d'éviter cette route, où il y a toujours d'oudeurs laides des mauvaises odeurs et des vols.Evitamiento: une route principale, où on conduit vite la voiture.
Caquetá: autre route qui se croise avec Evitamiento.
Le métro va pour à Caquetá. Normalement quand Evitamiento reste sans embouteillages, je descends de dans le Métro et je prends un bus en à/jusqu'à Evitamiento.
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Hi Martin,
I correct your writing. Congratulations ! You express yourself well in French. In general, you makes mistakes because of french prepositions which are difficult to understand for foreigners.
"sur" serves to indicates your localisation on something, on a land or a plot of land.
"à" serves to designate a precise destination like a city, a neighborhood, a store, etc, but not a vague destination or a wide destination like a country, although for saying "I go to Canada", French people say "Je vais au Canada" ("au" is a similar preposition to "à").
"jusqu'à / jusqu'au" serves to designate a precise destination too (or a temporal localisation like past, present and future also), but contrary to "à/au", "jusqu'à/jusqu'au" includes an idea of progression in the space or in the time.
"dans" serves to indicate that something or someone is inside of another thing.
"Une route principale où on conduit vite la voiture". You don't need to say "la voiture" because in French, the verb "conduire" is very often used to refer to the car (or the truck), therefore the verb "conduire" includes in an intuitive way a locomotive means for the Frenches. We can say also : "Une route principale où les voitures circulent à vive allure" = "a main road where the cars move fast."
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