我的医生 - My Doctor
我的医生在美国对我帮助。他叫Ross，他的头发是棕色的，他有眼镜。我认识他在医院在美国。去年他帮我痊。他很偏心，但是一个非常好的医生。
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我的医生 - My Doctor
I laud you in learning this difficult language. You should provide an English version so that we can help you to correct more accurately. First of all, let me retranslate what you had written and I don't think this is what you had intended.
我的医生在美国对我帮助。My doctor, who is in America, helps me. 他叫Ross，He is called Ross. 他的头发是棕色的，His hair is brown他有眼镜。He has glasses/spectacles 我认识他在医院在美国。I know him in the hospital in America. 去年他帮我痊。Last year he helped me get well. 他很偏心，He is playing favourite 但是一个非常好的医生。but a very good doctor.
I assume that you are trying to say the following. If I am wrong, please let me know.
I have an American doctor. 我有个美国医生. He has brown hair and wears glasses. ... 而戴眼镜 (more natural in Chinese to say, 而他是近视, literally, "he's myopic")I know him from an American hospital. 我在一间美国院认识的. Last year he treated me. 去年他 看我的病 (literally, "he sees my sickness") He is caring and a great doctor. 他是一位(more respectful than 个) 很关怀和非常好的医生.
If you are saying "he is very fussy/fastidious/nitpicking (in a good way) but a good doctor" then use 他很吹
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我的医生 - My Doctor
我的美国医生帮助了我。他叫Ross，头发是棕色的，戴眼镜。我在美国的医院认识了他。去年他治愈了我的病。他很偏执，但是一个非常好的医生。0
我的医生 - My Doctor
我的医生在美国对我（对你什么方面的帮助这里要写明）帮助。他叫Ross，他的头发是棕色的，他有（估计是 戴）眼镜。我认识他在医院在（在医院 或者是 我认识他在美国的医院 英文一般 对比中文都是倒过来放词的）美国。去年他帮我痊（痊愈 疾病 ）。他很偏心，但是（多加一个是 但是 是一个词 但是.....？什么什么之类的）一个非常好的医生。0
我的医生 - My Doctor
我的医生在美国对我进行医疗上的帮助。他叫Ross，他的头发是棕色的，他戴着眼镜。我在美国的医院认识他。去年他帮我治病。他虽然很偏心，但却是一个非常好的医生。0
我的医生 - My Doctor
我在美国的医生帮助了我许多。他叫Ross，棕色头发，戴眼镜。去年我在美国医院里认识他，他助我痊愈。他很偏心，但是是一个非常好的医生。Want to progress faster?
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