I am cofused I love my family,I have four brothers and sisters.My brother want to buy a house recently, but he haven't enough money .So I lend him some,but still enough.By many way I raise enough

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I am cofused I love my family,I have four brothers and sisters.My brother want to buy a house recently, but he haven't enough money .So I lend him some,but still enough.By many way I raise enough money he need.But the whole event he indiference,he don't express buy or no at last.Idon't know is it right or wrong.I am confused.

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I am confused

I love my family, I have one brother and three sisters. My brother wanted to buy a house recently, but he didn't have enough money. So I lent him some, but he still didn't have enough. I raised the money he needed in many ways. But he is indifferent to the help I gave, he hasn't decided whether to buy or not in the end. I don't know if it is right or wrong. I am confused.

Hello Chunlanyi,

I think I have corrected your work without changing the meaning, the last part was quite difficult to work out.

Hope this helps

Bob

I am confused

I love my family, I have four brothers and sisters. My brother wants to buy a house recently soon, but he haven't doesn't have enough money. So I lent him some, but still it's not enough. By In many ways I can raise enough money that he needs. But the whole event time he is indifferent, he doesn't express that he wants to buy or not at last. I don't know if it is it right or wrong. I am confused.

You can also say, "My brother has recently wanted to buy a house." Don't forget a 'space' after commas and periods. And remember that when talking about another person (one person) the verb ends with 's'. Nice text!

I am cofused

I love my family, I have four brothers and sisters (here I would use "siblings" or say "I have 3 brothers and one sister" of course fixing the amount.My brother went to buy a house recently, but he didn't have enough money .So I lend him some, but it still wasn't enough (I think this is what you wanted to say). I raised money many different ways for him.But the whole event he indiference,he don't express buy or no at last.Idon't know is it right or wrong.I am confused.

I don't understand what you are trying to say in the blue part. The highlighted part shows what was fixed or could be fixed and in parenthesis is either saying why I changed it or how you could change it.

Your guess is my aim.I wan to konw my sentence is grammatically correct or correct expression.

I am slightly confused by your question. Are you asking if your sentence is grammatically correct? I can totally help with that!

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