A letter to the course lecturer.
You are employed full-time and also doing a part time evening course. You are not able to continue the course.
Write a letter to the course lecturer. In the letter:
• explain why you cannot continue the course
• describe the situation
• say what you will be doing.
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address.
“Dear Mr. Samuel Johnson
I am writing you this letter to inform you that I will not be able to attend one of your courses further.
My name is Artem R. I have been taking your evening course “Introduction to systems engineering” in the University of Melbourne for the last three months. I enrolled in this course on 22nd July 2016.
The main reason I cannot keep taking this course is my work schedule. A month ago I was employed by the consulting company “Kray Twins Co” and, according my work schedule, I end my work every day at 6.00 pm whereas the course begins at 6.20pm and I do not have enough time to commute to the University campus.
I would like to enroll to another your course in the same University, which topic is closely related to the topic of the mentioned above course. The name of this course is the “Real application of system engineering in the computer industry.” I would be grateful if you would approve my candidature for the participation in this course.
I sincerely thank you for your consideration and look forward for your positive response.
Yours Faithfully,
Artem R.”
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A letter to the course lecturer.
You are employed full-time and also doing a part time evening course. You are not able to continue the course.Write a letter to the course lecturer. In the letter:
• explain why you cannot continue the course
• describe the situation
• say what you will be doing.
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address.
“Dear Mr. Samuel Johnson
I am writing you this letter to inform you that I will not be able to further attend one of your courses further. (Or, "... attend one of your courses any further.")
My name is Artem R. I have been taking your evening course “Introduction to systems engineering” in the University of Melbourne for the last three months. I enrolled in this course on the 22nd July, 2016.
The main reason I cannot keep taking this course is my work schedule. A month ago I was employed by the consulting company “Kray Twins Co” and, according my work schedule, I end my work every day at 6.00 pm whereas the course begins at 6.20pm and I do not have enough time to commute to the University campus.
I would like to enroll to in another of your courses in the same University, which the topic is closely related to the topic of the mentioned above course course mentioned above. The name of this course is the “Real application of system engineering in the computer industry.” I would be grateful if you would approve my candidature for the participation in this course.
I sincerely thank you for your consideration and look forward for to your positive response.
Yours Faithfully,
Artem R.”
Very good writing Artem. In regards to 'mentioned above course', it's not necessarily wrong, but 'course mentioned above' sounds more natural. I am curious how other English teachers comment about it.
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A letter to the course lecturer.
You are employed full-time and also doing a part time evening course. You are not able to continue the course.Write a letter to the course lecturer. In the letter:
• explain why you cannot continue the course
• describe the situation
• say what you will be doing.
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address.
“Dear Mr. Samuel Johnson
I write to inform you that I will no longer be able to attend one of your courses.
My name is Artem R. I have been taking your evening course “Introduction to systems engineering” in the University of Melbourne for the last three months. I enrolled for this course on 22nd* July 2016.
The main reason I cannot continue this course is my work schedule. A month ago I was employed by the consulting company “Kray Twins Co” and, according to my work schedule, I must finish each day at 6.00 pm whereas the course begins at 6.20pm and I do not have enough time to commute to the University campus.
I would like to enrol for another of your courses at the same university, which topic is closely related to the previous one. The name of this course is “Real applications of system engineering in the computer industry.” I would be grateful if you would approve my candidature for this course.
I sincerely thank you for your consideration and look forward to your positive response.
Yours Faithfully,
Artem R.”
Very well written!
*or, 22 July 2016
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A letter to the course lecturer.
You are employed full-time and also doing a part time evening course. You are not able to continue the course.Write a letter to the course lecturer. In the letter:
• explain why you cannot continue the course
• describe the situation
• say what you will be doing.
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address.
“Dear Mr. Samuel Johnson
I am writing to you this letter to inform you that I will not be able to attend one of your courses any further.
My name is Artem R. I have been taking your evening course “Introduction to systems engineering” in the University of Melbourne for the last three months. I enrolled in this course on 22nd July 2016.
The main reason I cannot keep taking continue this course is my work schedule. A month ago I was employed by the consulting company “Kray Twins Co” and, according my work schedule, I end my finish work every day at 6.00 pm whereas the course begins at 6.20pm and I do not have enough time to commute to the University campus.
I would like to enroll to on another your course in the same University, which ideally a topic is closely related to the topic of the above mentioned course. The name of this course is the “Real application of system engineering in the computer industry.” I would be grateful if you would approve my candidature for the participation in this course.
I sincerely thank you for your consideration and look forward for your positive response.
Yours Faithfully,
Artem R.”
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I don't think there is any difference. Maybe I corrected one from another? With: in the, for the, on the ... one can choose any of them and it is ok. cf. at college, in college, on the chair, in the chair, ... the meaning is clear (even if the prepositions vary). English prepositions often admit of alternatives. I don't think it depends on the dialect. Anyway, if I have been as clear as mud, take courage; prepositions are one of the last details you will learn in English.
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I'm a bit confused about using of different preposition with the verb "to enroll". There are three variants: enroll in the course, enroll for the course and enroll on the course. What is the difference? May be it is some regional specifics?
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