Diary of my life in Canada September 25 (Food)
I don't know why but I can't stop eating nowadays...
I feel a lot of stress....may be.lol
After eating dinner, my friend and I went to a ice cream shop.
Even though the wether was so cold today, we ate ice cream out side.
Then, there are many line, so we also had to line up for almost 15 minutes.
But it was so tasty. I almost forgot the cold.lol
How can I stop eating?
When I stay home, I was like eat,eat,and eat.
Until I would feel bad, I would keep eating.
Sometimes I doubt I have a eating disorder.
The more I think I shouldn't eat, the more I feel I want to eat.
But I think I'm just not patient.
So I run for 20 minutes this morning. I know it was short time, but I haven't run these days so I needed to warm up.
I decided to run at least once a week for 30 minutes. I actually did it before.
So I can do it. It's for health and to stop eating too much anymore!
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Diary of my life in Canada September 25 (Food)
I don't know why but I can't stop eating nowadays...I feel have been under a lot of stress maybe. lol
After eating dinner, my friend and I went to an ice cream shop.
Even though the weather was so cold today, we ate ice cream outside.
Then, there are many was a long line, so we also had to stand in line up for almost 15 minutes.
But it was so tasty that I almost forgot about the cold. lol
How can I stop eating?
When I stay home, I was am like eat, eat, and eat.
Until I would start to feel bad, I would keep eating.
Sometimes, I doubt wonder if I have an eating disorder.
The more I think I shouldn't eat, the more I feel I want to eat.
But I think I'm just not patient.
So I ran for 20 minutes this morning. I know it was a short time, but I haven't run these days so I needed to warm up.
I decided to run at least once a week for 30 minutes. I have actually done it before.
So I can do it. It's for my health and to keep me from stop eating too much anymore!
Good!
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Diary of my life in Canada September 25 (Food)
I don't know why but I can't stop eating nowadays...I feel a lot of stress....may be.lol [I have been very stressed lately] (This sounds more natural)
After eating dinner, my friend and I went to a ice cream shop. [an ice cream shop] (Remember, use "an" if the next word starts with a vowel)
Even though the wether [weather] was so cold today, we ate ice cream out side [outside]
Then, there are many line, so we also had to line up for almost 15 minutes. [The line was long, so we had to wait in line for almost 15 minutes] (This sounds more natural).
But it was so tasty. I almost forgot the cold.lol [It was so tasty that I almost forgot about the cold.] (This sounds more natural)
How can I stop eating?
When I stay home, I was like eat, eat, and eat. (Leave a space after every comma.)
Until I would feel bad, I would keep eating.
Sometimes I doubt I have an eating disorder. (This statement is saying that you think that you don't have an eating disorder) (If you want to say the opposite, you would say: "Sometimes I think that I have an eating disorder".)
The more I think I shouldn't eat, the more I feel I want to eat.
But I think I'm just not patient.
So I run (ran) for 20 minutes this morning. I know it was short time. , but I haven't run these days [lately], so I needed to warm up.
I decided to run at least once a week for 30 minutes. I actually did it before. [I have actually done it before.] (This sounds more natural.)
So I can do it. It's for (my) health and to stop eating too much anymore!
Comments:
Hiromi,
Your journal entry was very well written! There were only a few errors here and there; however, I really enjoyed reading what you had to say. Keep up the good work. Also, if you have any questions about my corrections, feel free to ask me.
Very Respectfully,
Kyle F.
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