I like peanuts
Yesterday，I went to my best friend's home to get outside .When I got in the door,"Wait me a minute,I 'll get my shirt."Then,he went into his room and said"My grandma is sleeping,but we can't wake her up,she got in trouble with her ears."I looked around his granny,she was in a deep sleep.Wow,there was a plant of peanuts on the table."She is sleeping,so I can stole some peanuts to eat."I thought.I hold a peanut to my mouth.Wow,it was so delicious ,i ate one by one .Suddenly!She woke up!Then ,she took out a half chocolate,and asked me."Would you want to eat?""No,thanks,granny."Then ,she ate a bite chocolate and spit out a peanut to the plant and said "I cannot chew the peanuts in chocolates."
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I like peanuts
Then,he went into his room and said,"My grandma is sleeping,but we can't wake her up,she got in trouble with her ears.("My grandma is sleeping but we don't have to be feared of waking her up as she has some hearing problems."I looked around at his granny,she was in a deep sleep."Wow,there was a plant bag of peanuts on the table",she is sleeping,so I can stole steal some peanuts to eat."
"I thought.I hold a peanut to my mouth(I took the first one),"Wow,it was is so delicious" ,i ate them one by one .Suddenly! she woke up!Then ,She took out a half a chocolate,and asked me."Would you want like to eat?"
"No thanks,granny."
Then she ate a bite chocolate (Then she took a bite)and spit out a peanut to the plant bag and said: "I cannot chew the peanuts." in chocolates."
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