Homeless

I want to talk about homeless in Italy.
In Italy we have a real problem with the homeless because sometimes they are involved in the local criminal group. What happens? Criminal Group (Is this the name of a specific group? If not, "The criminal group") use the homeless to make money by selling them the place (corner of the street or something like that). This is so sad! Maybe these people really need money but the criminal group doesn't want to "help" them without a price. Today, while I was chatting with my teacher, she said that in American they have something called a Food Bank. This is a great invention! I'm working in a supermarket and sometimes we have to throw away a lot of edible food. We have to do that too! I want a Food Bank for Italy!

Homeless

I want to talk about the homeless in Italy.
In Italy we have a real problem with the homeless because somethimes they are involved in the local criminal groups. Why/what happens next? Criminal Group use homeless to make money selling them the place (corner of the street or something like that). This is very sad! Maybe these people really need money but criminal groups don't want to "help" them without a price. When I chat with my teacher, she says that in America an organization called the Food Bank. This is a great invention! I'm working in a supermarket and sometimes we have to throw away a lof of edible food (all food is edible so this seems redundant). I think that we should do that too! I want a Food Bank also in Italy!

Homelessness

I want to talk about the homeless in Italy.
In Italy we have a real problem with the homeless because sometimes they are involved with the local criminal group. What happens? The criminal group* use homeless to beg for money and force them to buy their patch, ie the corner of the street or something like that. This is so sad! Maybe these people really need money but the criminal group does not want to "help" them without a price. Today, while I chatting with my teacher, she says that in American there exists the Food Bank. This is a great invention! I'm working in a supermarket and sometimes we have to throw away a lot of edible food.. We have to do that too! I want Food Bank also in Italy!

*or, The gangs use the homeless...

Very well written! And you are right. There is lots of talk now of food banks in London, too. It is a great idea for everywhere.