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Why I like poker I like poker because it is a metaphor of life. As well as a founding of a company, success depends of a subtile association of mathematics, psychology and luck ! Firstly, you always have to wonder if any move has more chance to be winning than losing. If you are able to guess your opponent’s hand, you have to calculate the probability to win at the end of the round. Secondly, whatever your emotions, you must be rational and lucid. You could have a very strong hand, but if all the signs seem to show you that your opponent has a stronger one, you have to fold, even though it could be a very hard decision. Sometimes that is the contrary, you could have very poor hand but you feel your opponent uncomfortable, you could have better chances if you attack him. You also have to dose your bets amounts. You have to bet sufficiently high if you want to push your opponent to fold. You don't have to bet too much if you just want to make the prize pool fatten because your hand is very strong. Thirdly, you have to accept stroke of bad luck. You could take the right decision but you are unlucky when cards come on the board. Just as in the real life, you could have a consistent plan, but an alea like a disease, a road accident, a flight cancellation or any other element beyond your control could compromise your success. You don't have to re-evaluate your strategy when your failure was caused by external parameters. For all these reasons, I think that poker is an excellent university of life.

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Why I like poker

I like poker because it is a metaphor of (could also be "for") life. Like the founding of a company, success depends of a subtle combination of mathematics, psychology and luck !

Firstly, you always have to wonder if any move has more chance to be winning than losing. If you are able to guess your opponent’s hand, you have to calculate the probability to win at the end of the round.

Secondly, whatever your emotions, you must be rational and lucid. You could have a very strong hand, but if all the signs seem to show you that your opponent has a stronger one, you have to fold, even though it could be a very hard decision. Sometimes it's the opposite, you could have very poor hand but you feel your opponent is uncomfortable, you could have better chances if you attack him. You also have to dose your bets amounts. You have to bet sufficiently high if you want to push your opponent to fold. You don't want to bet too much if you just want to make the prize pool fatten the pot because your hand is very strong.

Thirdly, you have to accept strokes of bad luck. You could make the right decision but you are be unlucky when cards come on the board. Just as in the real life you could have a consistent plan, but a complication like a disease, a road accident, a flight cancellation or any other element beyond your control could compromise your success. You don't have to re-evaluate your strategy when your failure was caused by external parameters.


For all these reasons, I think that poker is an excellent study of life.

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Notes:

Your English is excellent, and you have a good vocabulary. I had to imply from context (and google) what you meant by "alea" which google tells me means hazard. In the context of your sentence I believe complication is the correct word choice.

The final sentence of your third point is fine in English but seems to be contrary to your overall tone so far. Perhaps "You may not have to re-evaluate your strategy when an external factor leads to failure" would fit better. 

Also in your last sentence the use of university, I feel study would be more appropriate.


Hope my corrections and notes help.

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