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Animals under threat This is a controversial matter; many people think that there are not so many animal species which are in danger, which are becoming extinct, but I think that those people are wrong. Being honest, some species of animals, like white rhino, Bengal tiger, red tuna, African elephant, gorilla, orangutan, leopard, panda bear and an infinite collection of others are disappearing these days. The fact that so many creatures are diying out is not only a bad thing for wildlife, but also for us, for human, for example, red tuna is important in human diet. If very living being which is in danger disappear, we will become extict too, perhaps not tomorrow, but probably in a thousand years. Each living organism has a function in nature, even if we do not think so. For this reason I think we should protect them. The main reason of these disappearances is human being. We do not look after nature, do not think about animals, we treat them like toys. They were not created to entertain us, they were created to live in nature so please, let's do something for them.

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Animals under threat

This is a controversial matter; many people think that there are not so many animal species which that are in danger, which are becoming extinct, but I think that those people are wrong. Being To be honest, some species of animals, like the white rhino, the Bengal tiger, the red tuna, the African elephant, the gorilla, the orangutan, the leopard, the panda bear and an infinite collection of others are disappearing these days.

The fact that so many creatures are dying out is not only a bad thing for wildlife, but also for us, for humans. For example, red tuna is important in the human diet. If a very living being which is in danger, disappears, we will become extict too, perhaps not tomorrow, but probably in a thousand years. Each living organism has a function in nature, even if we do not think so. For this reason I think we should protect them.

The main reason of these disappearances are human beings. We do not look after nature, we do not think about animals, we treat them like toys. They were not created to entertain us, they were created to live in nature so please, let's do something for them.

Good writing. If you want to review some rules for 'a' and 'the', there are some links below. If you have any questions about my corrections, let me know. - Jason

http://www.ef.com/english-resources/english-grammar/indefinite-articles/

http://www.ef.com/english-resources/english-grammar/definite-article/



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