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If you wouldn’t have to worry about money, what would you do all day?
Well I have some things that I enjoy doing. But I would try to do not only one thing all day long. I would study languages about one or two hours a day. I would watch movies about one movie in the a day, and read a book spending one hour in the a day. I would go to the gym for about 1 hour and a half one and a half hours. I would spend some time with my wife and family. I would work in on something interesting for about three to four hours. Somedays I would go to different places, I would play video games, and I would like to write a book so I would invest some time doing it that. I also want to create video courses or cell phone applications.Nice writing Diego. In writing, we usually write out numbers, one, two, etc. After ten, we can then use the numbers, 11, 12, 13. There are other rules too but this is a basic one.
Also, the phrase one hour and a half is not correct. We say "one and a half hours", "two and a half hours", etc. You just have to repeat this in your head again and again to remember it because it's easy to want to translate from Spanish "una hora y media". Let me know if you have any questions about my corrections. - Jason
If you wouldn’t didn't have to worry about money, what would you do all day?
Well I have some things that I enjoy doing. But I would try to do not only one thing all day long. I would study languages about 1 or 2 hours a day. I would watch movies about 1 movie in the a day. Read a book spending for 1 hour in the a day. I would go to the gym for about 1 hour and a half. Spend some time with my wife and family. I would work in something interesting for about 3 to 4 hours, some days I would go to different places, I would play video games. I would like to write a book so I would invest some time doing it. I also want to create video courses or cell phone applications.Nice little essay Diego. The commas in the last three sentence were a bit weird better to have full stops.
If I didn't have to worry about money, I would chill out and teach people English. Oh wait I do that already :)
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