A controvensial topic about the right of animal
In recent years, there has been much controversy over the cultivating of animals for feeding. In the past, The ancients lived in a harsh environment, fighting against the beast and hunting for living. As the cultivating technology developed, our ancestors tended to plow, or feed some animals such as pigs and chicken as food resources.
The animal right folks view the cultivation of animals for food as a brutal behaviour. A large proportion of these people are vegetarian, and they always claim that the animals, even meat pigs have the same right as humans to live in a free environment, and cannot be killed for pork at will. The domestic animal is also a life, and it has emtions, and should be treated equally.
Conversly, those who consume a lot of meat everday may think that the dishes made from meat are really tasty. They have spent a lot of time and materials on cultivating these meat animals, thereby treating them as a source of food is reasonable. Another viewpoint is that humans have been at the top of the food chain, so they can eat what they want to. If the pig live in the jungle, they will be killed by other big cats such as tigers as well.
In my view, I think the cultivation of tamed animals as edible materials is reasonable, and is just a consequence of competition in the nature world. However, hunting or killing the endangered creature should be banned, since they are also invaluable.
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A controversial topic about the rights of animals
In recent years, there has been much controversy over the cultivating of animals for feeding. In the past, ancient people (Or, centuries ago, people...) lived in a harsh environments, fighting against the beasts wild animals and hunting for to live. As the cultivating technology developed, our ancestors tended began to plow, or even feed some tender non-wild animals such as pigs and chicken as food resources.The animal rights folks view the cultivation raising of animals for food as a brutal behaviour. A large proportion of these people are vegetarian, and they always claim that the animals, even meat pigs have the same right as humans to live in a free environment, and cannot be killed for pork at will. The Domestic animals is are also life living creatures, and it they have emtions, and should be treated equally.
Converesly, those who consume a lot of meat everyday may think that the dishes made from meat are really tasty. They have spent a lot of time and materials on cultivating these meat animals, thereby treating them as a source of food is reasonable. Another viewpoint is that humans have been are at the top of the food chain, so they can eat what they want to. If the pigs live in the jungle, they will be killed by other big large cats such as tigers as well.
In my view, I think the cultivation raising of tamed animals as edible materials is reasonable, and is just a consequence of competition in the natural world. However, hunting or killing the endangered creature should be banned, since they are also invaluable.
Moss Mo, good writing. You will see that some words that you chose are good, but with this topic, we just use different words. Like 'wild animals' instead of 'beasts', 'raising' animals instead of 'cultivating' animals, 'large' cats instead of 'big' cats. If you have any questions, let me know. - Jason
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A controversial topic about the rights of animals
In recent years, there has been much controversy over the cultivating of animals for feeding consumption. In the past, The ancients Our ancestors lived in a harsh environment, fighting against the beasts and hunting for living sustenance. As the cultivation technology developed, our ancestors tended to plough, or even feed some tender (I'm not sure what you mean here?) animals such as pigs and chicken as food resources.The animal rights folks view the cultivation of animals for food as a brutal behaviour. A large proportion of these people are vegetarian, and they always claim that the animals, even meat pigs have the same rights as humans to live in a free environment, and cannot be killed for pork at will. The domestic animal is also a life living thing, and it has emotions, and should be treated equally.
Conversely, those who consume a lot of meat everyday may think that the dishes made from meat are really tasty. They have spent a lot of time and materials on cultivating these meat farm animals, thereby so treating them as a source of food is reasonable. Another viewpoint is that humans have been are at the top of the food chain, so they can eat what they want to. If the pig lives in the jungle, they will be killed by other big cats such as tigers as well.
In my view, I think the cultivation of tamed animals as edible materials is reasonable, and is just a consequence of competition in the natural world. However, hunting or killing the endangered creatures should be banned, since as they are also invaluable.
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