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Could you please correct my sentences? I'm goingt to post these sentences on my blog. Please check and correct if it contains sound strange English. https://gogomountain.blogspot.jp/2016/09/azumayasan.html ----- Mt.Azumaya is located in border between Nagano and Gunma Prefecture, Japan. There are some similar name's mountains. So, I often mix it up with Mt.Azuma or Mt.Asama. This aria is famous as a farm(Sugadaira) and ski resorts. I think everybody can climb this mountain because it is very easy to climb even if you aren't used to mountain climbing. Although there are some steep path, but it's no matter. In this time, I used the bullet train then I didn't need to get up early. It was very good access from Tokyo. But it makes the mountain to be crowded in good weather on a weekend. If you want to feel calm atmosphere, I recommend to go there on November. And you need to caution to climb in winter because it'll be covered with a lot of snow after December. ----- Thanks for your favor.

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Could you please correct my sentences?

I'm going to post these sentences on my blog. Please check and correct them if they contain strange sounding English.
https://gogomountain.blogspot.jp/2016/09/azumayasan.html

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Mt.Azumaya is located at the border between Nagano and Gunma Prefecture, Japan. There are similar named mountains. So, I often mix it up with Mt.Azuma or Mt.Asama. This area is famous for a farm (Sugadaira) and ski resorts.
I think everybody can climb this mountain because it is very easy to climb even if you aren't used to mountain climbing. Although there are some steep paths, but it doesn't matter.
During this time, I used the bullet train so I didn't need to get up early. It has good access from Tokyo. But it causes the mountain to be crowded in good weather on a weekend. If you want to feel a calm atmosphere, I recommend going there in November. And you need to be careful when climbing in winter because it'll be covered with a lot of snow after December.
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Thanks for your favor.

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