Rainy day
I planed to glasses shopping this afternoon. But at the end I failed to head out. Because after lunch, the sky was getting dark then raining the whole afternoon. I had to stayed at home.
It was very hard then drizzling, and big again then small...
We have a lot of rain this summer, it is said the rain fall is about 70% more than usual. Rain makes the weather cooler but during the sunny day, it is still hot.
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Rainy day
I planed to go glasses shopping this afternoon, but atin the end I failed todidn't leave the house head out. Bbecause after lunch, the sky was getting dark then rainingand it rained the whole afternoon. I had to stayed at home.ItThe rain was very hard then drizzling, and big again then small...
We have had a lot of rain this summer. It is said the rain fall is about 70% more than usual. Rain makes the weather cooler but during the sunny day, it is still hot.
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