My first text with poetic language (please corrections)
I was not a man when I was a man
I was a king when I started to be a freeman
I was not a man when I had hate
I was a king when I heard a word from the darkness
I was as teenager walk to darkness to the light
But, now, I am a king, inside me a king, a king of light
I lived busy of my pride, of my day to day
A distant day, I walked volunteer to the darkness and i knew myself
From the darkness to the full life, just my own will, not the destiny
I called myself, my freinds, my fight, my way, my trenches.
I have found others person that were told "I too have known the real freedom"
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My first text with poetic language (please corrections)
I was not a man when I was a manI was a king when I started to be a free man
I was not a man when I had hate
I was a king when I heard a word from the darkness
I was as a teenager walking from darkness to the light
But, now, I am a king, inside me is a king, a king of light
I lived full? of my pride, of my day to day
A distant day, I walked volunteering to the darkness and I knew myself
From the darkness to the full life, just my own will, not the destiny
I called myself, my friends, my fight, my way, my trenches.
I have found others persons/ people that were told "I too have known the real freedom"
Note: it is very difficult to correct modern poetry as there are no real rules. Please feel free to disregard my suggestions!
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