hi ;) Could you check and correct a draft for a speech ? hello .I have made a draft for a speech which I will give in my English class . Though I did my best to make it , I am sure that I have some mistakes in it and the words used in a draft might be strange . So , I would like you to check and correct it . Also , I hope that you will give me advice . I would appreciate it . Here is the draft for a speech : Hello , everyone . Well , I have a question . Do you have any plans after graduation ? Though we dont have enough time now thanks to university exam , we will be able to do anything we want to do after graduation . And i think almost everone would travel. ( I will attach a picture of Thailand on a brackboad ) Because I am sure that we must be tired after university exam , this time , I would like to propose " relaxed trip in Thailand ". Thailand is very near and so cheap to visit from Japan . Just 6 hours flight and almost 40,000 yen of air ticket will take you to Thailand . I think this is favorable condition for us . My plan to travel Thailand is 3days and 2 nights . The first day , wake up early and lets go sightseeing . Do you know " Wat Phra Keo " ? in English , " Temple of the Emerald Buddha " . It is a popular tourist spot . and there are so many other famous and gourgeous spots around here . This is a easy map . ( show classmates a picture of a map ) Take a look ( point a map ) , this is the Emerald Buddha and another 33 spots . of course , There are noy only spots like beautiful buildings or famous statues but also the place where we can have a massage and eat delicious Thailand's foods . like this ( show classmates some pictures ) after visiting those places , great hotel is waiting for you . You can see a great night view because most of the hotels in Thailand have the place that we can relax under romantic sky view . The second day , why do not you go shopping ? " Talat Chatuchak " is the largest shopping area in Southeast Asea . It is around 113.000 square metre and has around 15.000 stores . It would be so fun to hung around . and after shopping , you can not miss to meet elephants . It would be also one of great memories . When you are enjoying yourself , the time seems to fly by . It is already night . So , In the end of this trip , lets go to see Thai boxing . In fact , the admission is free , so you can enjoy it for free ! How was my suggestion to travel in Thailand ? I hope we all can enjoy after graduation . Thank you.