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My ordinary day These days,I am so busy. And,I feel a little tired. I am a softerware engineer。I has been wored in a big company.I get up at 7:30 every day.Then ,I go to the company by metro.It takes me almost 40 minutes.I arrive at the company at nearly 9:00.I say hello to my colleagues.Then, I start my work.My job is coding.Sometimes,I feel it is funny ,but sometimes I think it is boring.Maybe I am a girl,so I am not good at my job.I work until 20:00.When I arrive at home, it has been 21:00.And this status has lasted half past month. In the future,maybe I will change another job.

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My ordinary day

These days I am so busy, and I feel a little tired.
I am a software engineer and I has been  wored work win in a big company. I get up at 7:30 every day. Then I go to the company work by metro. It takes me almost 40 minutes. I arrive at the company at nearly 9:00. I say hello to my colleagues. Then, I start my work. My job is coding. Sometimes I feel it is funny fun but sometimes I think it is boring. Maybe because I am a girl so I feel I am not good at my job. I work until 20:00. When I arrive at home, it has been is 21:00. And this status has lasted half past month. (I don't understand this sentence, can you write it in another way?)
In the future, maybe I will change to another job.

Good attempt! 

It's more common in English to say "Then I go to work" instead of "go to the company". 

You are correct, you say "I arrive AT the company", "I arrive TO my friend's house", etc. But when we use the word 'home', it's correct to say, "I arrive home", without 'to' or 'at'. 

Let me know if you have any questions. - Jason

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My ordinary day

In t these days I am so busy. And,I feel a little tired.
I am a softerware engineer。 .I has been wored work in a big company.I get up at 7:30 every day.Then ,I go to the company by metro.It takes me almost 40 minutes.I arrive at the company at nearly 9:00.I say hello to my colleagues.Then, I start my work.My job is coding.Sometimes, I feel it is funny ,but sometimes I think it is boring.Maybe I am a girl,so I am not good at my job.I work until 20:00.When I arrive at home, it has been   is  alrealy 21:00.And this status  situation has lasted half past  a month.
In the future,maybe I will change another  my job.

It is my first time to revise others' composition. Therefore, please forgive me if I have some mistakes. I have tried my best and hope you will like it. Thank you.

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My ordinary day

These days, I am so busy and I feel a little tired.
I am a softerware engineer。I has have been wored working in a big company.  I get up at 7:30 every day.  Then ,I go to the company office by metro.  It takes me almost 40 minutes.  I arrive at the company at nearly 9:00  .I say hello to my colleagues.  Then, I start my work.  My job is coding.  Sometimes,I feel it is funny ,but sometimes I think it is boring.  Maybe I am a girl,so I am not good at my job *because I am a girl*.  I work until 20:00.  When I arrive at home, it has been it is already 21:00.  And this status has lasted half past *been going on* for two month*s*, now.


In the future , maybe I will change *to* another job.

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