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IELTS writing :About gender difference It has been argued that there are different thoughts of male and female getting a job based on their physical strength and weakness. In my opinion, different genders can handle different jobs. Firstly, men seem to fit into the work which need strong physical bodies. For example, we always can see men building houses at construction sites. Other jobs like pilots and politicians, which all require a person who has preciseness , and men show that advantage . However, compared with men, women are more gentle. That explained why most of the teachers or nurses are female workers. They have patience when they teach children or take care of patients, and their gentle voice might comfort people a lot. Some jobs cannot be defined which gender done well.In Chinese tradition, women should cook three meals for a family, which makes people regard women as good cooks. But, there are also many male cooks working in restaurants as chefs. So that is to say, sometimes men and women can do jobs not because of the gender difference, but due to their working skills. In conclusion, both men and women workers are required a various of jobs. Some are suitable for men while others may good for women. Gender is not the main considered factor, I think employers should put more emphases on their qualification for work. Male and female are equal in the job application.

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IELTS writing :About gender difference

It has been argued that there are different thoughts and opinions about males and females getting a job based on their physical strength and weaknesses. In my opinion, different genders can handle different jobs.

Firstly, men seem to fit into the types of work which need strong physical bodies strength (strength is a better word here). For example, we always can see men building houses at construction sites. Other jobs like pilots and politicians, which all require a person who has preciseness precision, and men show that advantage .

However, compared with men, women are more gentle. That explains why most of the teachers or nurses are female workers. They have patience when they teach children or take care of patients, and their gentle voice might comfort people a lot.

Some jobs cannot be defined by which gender done does it well. In Chinese tradition, women should cook three meals for a family, which makes people regard women as good cooks. But, there are also many male cooks working in restaurants as chefs. So that is to say, sometimes men and women can do jobs not because of the gender difference, but due to their working skills.

In conclusion, both men and women male and female workers are required to do a various variety of jobs. Some are suitable for men while others may be good for women. Gender is not the main considered factor, and I think employers should put more emphasis on their qualifications for work. Males and females are equal in the job application.

Good writing. When describing men and women and you use the word 'workers', it's a bit more natural to say "male and female workers". Otherwise it's common to say, "men and women both cook well..."

There are a variety of ways to write this and correct this, so let me know if you have questions. - Jason


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Well , I think males and females do have some different advantages while they are applying jobs.Dsinctive differences in physical strength, resistence and personality exist between men and women, which decides different preferences in choosing jobs.Gender is not the only factor which employers should think about, but the behaviour of their works. Thank you for your disagreement, that's really help me think deeply.
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I'm not completely agree with you because I feel you're supporting stereotypes and some situations (less woman politicians, less man teachers) that happens just because the sexist education and prejudices.

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