Weather
In my country the climate is very different depending on the state .
In the South, for example , we have four seasons in a single day. I'ts very interesting .
we have to prepare in the morning for sudden weather changes .
In winter we have frost in the morning, very strong sun at noon, rain and cold late night..
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Weather
In my country the climate is very different depending on the state.In the South, for example , we have four seasons in a single day. It's very interesting .
We have to prepare in the morning for sudden weather changes.
In the winter we have frost in the morning, very strong sun at noon, and rain and cold late night.
Good writing. In the last sentence, if you add 'the' before 'winter', it just sounds a bit more natural.
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Weather
In my country the climate is very different depending on the state .In the South, for example , we have four seasons in a single day. I'ts very interesting .
we have to prepare in the morning for sudden weather changes .
In winter we have frost in the morning, very strong sun at noon, rain and cold late night..
In addition to Jason's corrections, I would replace the highlighted sentence with:
"In the South, for example, it is possible to experience all four seasons in a single day."
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