One of the most tense movies I have ever seen. Today I watched a movie called ''The Walk''. This movie is about a man who crossed the wire between World Trade Center in America. I wanted to watch this

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One of the most tense movies I have ever seen. Today I watched a movie called ''The Walk''. This movie is about a man who crossed the wire between World Trade Center in America. I wanted to watch this movie at theater. But I couldn't. So I had to wait for the DVD of the movie to come out. Actually this movie was amazing. I was sweaty on my hands while watching the guy walking on the wire. Even now, every time I remember the scene I sweat.

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One of the most tense movies I have ever seen.

Today I watched a movie called ''The Walk''. This movie is about a man who crossed ~~the~~ [on a] wire between [the] World Trade Center [towers] in America. I [had] wanted to watch this movie at [the] theater. But I couldn't~~. So~~ [, so]I had to wait for the DVD of the movie to come out. Actually this movie was amazing. I was sweaty on my hands while watching the guy walking on the wire[this sentence is not wrong, but it is grammatically awkward - you can say, for example: "My hands were sweaty while I was watching this guy walk on the wire"]. Even now, every time I remember the scene I sweat.

Note: the sentence "I had wanted to watch this movie" is past participle. This means that in the past you wanted to watch. If you use the simple past tense, "I wanted to watch this movie" it sounds as if 'yesterday' or 'this morning', you wanted to watch the movie. I think you meant to use the past participle here...?

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