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German Streetfood When I was in Dutch last year, I recognized that they had no bakery stores at all. Bakeries are typical for German cities. You will find lots of them in the pedestrian precinct offering all types of bread, confectionery and drinks. But German streetfood offers much more that baked food. Turkish fastfood has become very popular in Germany too. There is Döner, a flatbread filled with vegetables and salad sauce or Falafel, fried balls made of chickpeas. The interesting thing is that the classical american streetfood like McDonnalds or Burger King is loosing its popularity. A new trend called vegan food has established within the last few years in German cities. Tasty food which hasnˋt too much calories is bought by more and more people. More than one million Germans call tehmselves vegans and the number is still climbing.

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German Street Food

When I was in the Netherlands last year, I realised/noticed that they had no bakeries at all. Bakeries are typical/normal in German cities. You will find lots of them in the pedestrian precinct* offering all types of bread, confectionery and drinks. But German street food offers much more than baked food. Turkish fast food has become very popular in Germany, too. There is Döner, a flatbread filled with vegetables and salad cream/salad dressing, or Falafel: fried balls made (out) of chickpeas. The interesting thing is that the traditional American street food like McDonald's or Burger King is losing its popularity. A new trend called vegan food has been established in the last few years in German cities. Tasty food which doesn't have too many calories is being bought by more and more people. More than one million Germans call themselves vegans and the number is still climbing/growing.

(*When you say 'pedestrian precinct,' what is it you're talking about?) 

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Notes:

1. "Vegan food has established." When you write in the Passive, remember to put 'been' in between 'have/has' and the Past Participle

                   HAVE/HAS + BEEN + PAST PARTICIPLE

                              The house has been painted

                              The cat has been fed

                              They have been arrested

Very well done! 

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German Streetfood

When I was in Dutch last year, I recognized that they had no bakery stores at all. Bakeries are typical for German cities. You will find lots of them in the pedestrian precinct offering all types of bread, confectionery and drinks. But German streetfood offers much more that baked food. Turkish fastfood has become very popular in Germany too. There is Döner, a flatbread filled with vegetables and salad sauce or Falafel, fried balls made of chickpeas. The interesting thing is that the classical american streetfood like McDonnalds or Burger King is loosing its popularity. A new trend called vegan food has established within the last few years in German cities. Tasty food which hasnˋt too much calories is bought by more and more people. More than one million Germans call tehmselves vegans and the number is still climbing.

When I was in the Netherlands last year, I noticed that there were no bakeries at all. Bakeries are quite common in German cities. ... But you can buy much more than baked goods in a pedestrian zone in Germany, however. ... fast food.  For example, there is ... pita bread filled with .... The ... is that classic American fast food such as ... is losing (loose = locker - a really annoying error). In the last few years, vegan food has become very popular in German cities. More and more people are buying tasty, low-calorie food. (Do you mean vegan food here or something else: the reference isn't clear. I think you mean " ... this tasty, low-calorie food.") Now, more than a million ("one" sounds rather "scientific" for this context) consider themselves vegans, and there are more every day.

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German Streetfood

When I was in Germany last year, I recognized that they had no bakery stores at all. Bakerys are typical for German cities. You will find lots of them in the pedestrian precinct ofering all types of bread, confectionery and drinks. But German streetfood offers much more that baked food. Turkish fastfood has become very popular in Germany too. There is Döner, a flatbread filled with vegetables and salad sauce or Faafel, fried balls made of chickpeas. The interesting thing is that the classical american streetfood like McDonnalds or Burger King is loosing its popularity. A new trend called vegan food has established within the last few years in German cities. Tasty food which doesn't have too much calories is bought by more and more people. More than one million Germans are vegans and the numbers are still growing.

Very very good job. Almost no mistakes. The 'mistakes' you made just don't soud right to me, but I've been in Russia for a long time, so they might not be mistakes at all. Very good.

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I fully support a low-calorie diet. It's not about removing meat out of the diet, it's just people are intaking much more calories than they need.

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