Please translate it
So…i wrote this poem today,could anyone be so kind to translate it to English, anyone at all？
我去了你的城
行遍你经年的记忆
凄凄切切 却暗藏欣喜
你不会知晓 也无从知晓
我掩映在心底的秘密
似凉风逐树影 寒月照疏篱
寻寻觅觅 我看谁都是你
踽踽凉凉 我注定遇不见你
是谁说 旧情绵绵
绵绵在沉旧的坊市
绵绵在沉醉的软语
天鹅绒的故梦织起
教堂里的钟声敲起
再回望 你仍不在那里
若只如初初见你
颤颤承你的笑意
轻盈得像一簇雨
终不敌
恨匆匆 你萍踪难觅
孤零零 我却自别离
无你
浮生不过一梦矣
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 12
1
Please translate it
So…I wrote this poem today, can could anyone you 親切些be so kind to translate it to English, anyone at all？我去了你的城 I came to your city
行遍你经年的记忆 Walking to all places in your memory
凄凄切切 却暗藏欣喜 Though mournful but happiness is hidden within.
你不会知晓 也无从知晓 You won't know and unable to know
我掩映在心底的秘密 The secret in my heart, half hidden, half exposed.
似凉风逐树影 寒月照疏篱 Like the cold wind pursuing the shadows of the tree; like the moon shining through a fence of gaps
寻寻觅觅 我看谁都是你Everywhere I seek, each and everyone resembles you
踽踽凉凉 我注定遇不见你 Alone in sadness, destined never to meet you.
是谁说 旧情绵绵 Who said that love of the past is always there
绵绵在沉旧的坊市Forever deeply buried within the old city lanes
绵绵在沉醉的软语Forever in the drunkeness of the sweet sweet words
天鹅绒的故梦织起 To sew an old dream in the swan's down,
教堂里的钟声敲起 The [wedding] bells of the church had begun ringing
再回望 你仍不在那里 I look back, still you were absent
若只如初初见你 If only the first moment of our meeting,
颤颤承你的笑意 I trembled by your smiles,
轻盈得像一簇雨 Lithely like the gathering rain
终不敌 In the end, no longer can I endure
恨匆匆 你萍踪难觅 very quicky; traces of you floated away; no longer to be easily found
孤零零 我却自别离 Alone I depart
无你 without you
浮生不过一梦矣 Alas, life floats past like a dream.
0
梁宗岱先生译十四行诗，尽量使译文韵脚和原诗韵脚一致。当然我不是莎翁，我只是个假装是诗人其实是俗人的小女子。不过我想，italki藏龙卧虎，说不定真藏着哪位高手，能效仿梁先生呢。
0
翻译下撒
0
文采横溢！
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
