The first day in school.
Hello,my name is lily,from Hubei province.Today is the first day of school.We did a lot of work today.First ,we cleaned the room,including the tables and the windows.Second,we went to the library to take the books.Third,we met our teachers and had a meeting about the rules of school.Then we studied by ourselves until 10 in the night.
This is the first time I write things on the internet.I want to improve my English,so thanks for everyone who help me.
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The first day in school.
Hello, my name is lily, and I am from Hubei province. Today is was the first day of school. We did a lot of work today. First, we cleaned the room, including the tables and the windows. Second, we went to the library to take/get the books. Third, we met our teachers and had a meeting about the rules of the school. Then we studied by ourselves until 10 in the at night.This is the my first time I writing things something on the internet. I want to improve my English, so thanks for to everyone who helps me.
You can also say, "This is the first time that I have written something on the internet".
In regards to "take/get the books", it just depends on the exact meaning. If you are a teacher, I would say, "we went to the library to get our books (for our lessons??). Or if you went with your students, you can say, "we went to the library to get some books". Or if you are a student, you can say the same, "we went to the library to get some books".
Let me know if you have any other questions. - Jason
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The first day in school.
Hello,my name is Lily,from Hubei province. Today is the first day of school. We did a lot of work today. First ,we cleaned the room, including the tables and the windows. Second, we went to the library to take the books. Third, we met our teachers and had a meeting about the rules of school.Then we studied by ourselves until 10 in the night.This is the first time I write things on the internet.I want to improve my English,so thanks to everyone who helps me.
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