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The poverty reduction in Brazil As a good patriot, I still believe in Brazil. Despite the crisis, most brazilians are laying aside some money to renovate their houses. What such good news! In fact, Brazil has the fastly growing economies in the World because the government improve the living conditions, creating the ' Bolsa Família' Program. But, unfortunately, it barely failed to promote the desired outcome. It didn´t still erradicate the poverty in Brazil. On the other hand, for an effective economy grouth, the government should addapt new development strategies in order to solve the economic problems brought about the devaluation of the brazilian real currency. The autorities are trying to play down the seriousnes of the problems in Brazil: the criminality, the lack of jobs, the insecurity on the streets, the education and so on. Brazil aren´t still an affluent country, but I hardly believe it´ll be someday in the future. I´ll looking forward for this happening.

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The poverty reduction in Brazil

As a good patriot, I still believe in Brazil. Despite the crisis, most Brazilians are laying aside some money to renovate their houses. What Such good news!
In fact, Brazil has the fastly fastest growing economies economy in the world because the government is improving the living conditions, creating the "Bolsa Família" Program. But, unfortunately, it barely failed to promote achive the desired outcome. It didn´t still erradicate the poverty in Brazil. ("Brazil's poverty")
On the other hand, for an effective economy grouth growth, the government should addapt adapt new development strategies in order to solve the economic problems brought about causing the devaluation of the Brazilian real currency.
The authorities are trying to play down the seriousness of the problems in Brazil: the criminality, the lack of jobs, the insecurity on the streets, the education, and so on.
Brazil aren´t still isn't an affluent country, but I hardly believe it´ll be some day in the future. I´ll I'm looking forward for to this happening.

NOTE: Great notebook entry. Keep up the good work, Adriano!

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The poverty reduction in Brazil

As a good patriot, I still believe in Brazil. Despite the crisis, most brazilians Brazilians are laying putting aside some money to renovate their houses. What such good news!

As I am patriotic, I still believe in Brazil's future.
In fact, Brazil has one of the the fastly fastest growing economies in the World, (partly) because the government improved the living conditions, creating the ' Bolsa Família' Program. But, unfortunately, it barely failed to promote bring about the desired outcome. It didn´t still eradicate the poverty in Brazil.
On the other hand, for an effective economic growth  economy grouth, the government should adapt new development strategies and in order to solve the economic problems brought about such as the devaluation of the Brazilian real currency (Reales).
The authorities are trying to play down the seriousness of the problems in Brazil: like the criminality, the lack of jobs, the insecurity low social security on the streets, the standard of education and so on.
Brazil aren´t still isn't an affluent country, but I hardly believe it´ll be someday be one in the future. I´ll  I'm looking forward for to this happening.

Cool, I like Economics!

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