Childhood!
Childhood is a special time. When we was children, we could believe on Santa Claus or in fluffy unicorn or in fairies. And how strong was disappointment, when we knew, that Santa Claus it is only fiction.
But at all people was childhood different ways. Somebody didn't have parents. Who was stopped believe in the dreams, but somebody become stronger.
Each of us has its own history of childhood that shapes our life.
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Childhood!
Childhood is a special time. When we were children, we could believe in Santa Claus or in fluffy unicorns or in fairies. And But how strong was our disappointment when we knew learned that Santa Claus it is only fiction?But at all people was go through childhood differently ways. Somebody Some people didn't have parents. Who was Some stopped believing in their dreams, but somebody became stronger.
Each of us has have its our own history of childhood that shapes our life.
Nice job Olya! When we talk about one person, we can say "somebody". When we talk about many people, we can say "some people" or "some boys" or just "some". If you have any questions, please ask!
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Childhood!
Childhood is a special time. When we was were children, we could believe on in Santa Claus, or in fluffy unicorns, or in fairies. And How strong was [the] disappointment when we knew [discovered or realized] that Santa Claus it is only fiction.But at all people was childhood different ways. [But people experience childhood in different ways.] Somebody Some people didn't have parents. Who was stopped believe in the dreams, but somebody become stronger. (This sentence is confusing to me. I am not sure if your intention is to say, "Some people didn't have parents who stopped them from believing in dreams; some people had parents who made them stronger people." ?)
Each Every person has of us has its [his/her] own history of childhood that shapes our life.
This is how I might compose it:
Childhood!
Childhood is a special time. When we were children, we could believe in Santa Claus, in fluffy unicorns, or in fairies. How strong was the disappointment when we discovered that Santa Claus is only a fiction! But people experience childhood in different ways. Some people didn't have parents who stopped them from believing in dreams. Some people had parents who made them stronger people. Every person has his or her own history of childhood that shapes life.
If anything is confusing, please let me know and I will help you.
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Childhood!
Childhood is a special time. When we were children, we could believe in Santa Claus, or in fluffy unicorns or in fairies. And how disappointed we were, when we knew, that Santa Claus it is only fiction.But, everyone's childhood was different. Some people didn't have parents. They didn't stop believing in their dreams, but they became stronger.
Each of us has our own history of childhood that shapes our life.
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for me my childhood was full of loneliness, but it was nice though, i used to watch cartoon and american movies and play video games all the time,
i was so shy specially and a girl talks to me, this doesn't happen now :)
there are a lot of nice and funny things happened in our childhood makes us feel good when we remember it.
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