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A biography Lionel Messi is a player of football. Now he plays in the FC Barcelona and Team Argentina because he is argentinian. He was born in 1987 there, in the town Rosario. Now, Messi is the best player in the world and probably of all times, because he has won five golden ball and he has won many tittle with his team too, but never with Argentina. He has had highs and lows during his life. When He was little no teams wants because He has a problem of evolution. Later, Barcelona signed him because He was really very good. Every his family moved a Barcelona. Now, he is married and he has a two son. His wife has been his lifelong girlfriend. Messi make much money, too much and now he has many problems with the justicie. To conclude, messi could be the best player in the world but some peolpe say that Cristiano Ronaldo is better than Messi

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A biography

Lionel Messi is a football player. Now he plays in the FC Barcelona and Team Argentina because he is Argentinian. He was born in 1987 there, in the town of Rosario. Now, Messi is the best player in the world and probably of all times, because he has won five golden balls and he has won many titles with his team too, but never with Argentina.

He has had highs and lows during his life. When He was young no teams wanted him  because he had a problem of evolution( Not sure what word you should put here). Later, Barcelona signed him because he was really very good. His whole family moved to Barcelona. Now, he is married and he has a two sons. His wife has been his lifelong girlfriend.

Messi make a lot of money, maybe too much and now he has many problems with the law. To conclude, Messi could be the best player in the world but some people say that Cristiano Ronaldo is better than Messi
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A biography

Lionel Messi is a player of football. Now he plays in the FC Barcelona and Team Argentina because he is Argentinian. He was born in 1987 there, in the town Rosario. Now, Messi is the best player in the world and probably of all times, because he has won five golden balls and he has won many tittles with his team too, but never with Argentina.

He has had highs and lows during his life. When he was little no teams wants wanted because he has a problem of evolution (que palabra quiere usar aqui?). Later, Barcelona signed him because he was really very good. Everyone in his family moved a to Barcelona. Now, he is married and he has a two sons (no se usa la personal "a" en ingles come en espanol). His wife has been his lifelong girlfriend.

Messi makes much a lot of money, too much and now he has many problems with the justicie law. To conclude, Messi could be the best player in the world but some peolpe people say that Cristiano Ronaldo is better than Messi.

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