Does student need to study hard?
When I was a student I thought I'll study hard then I'll find a good job and employers will be happy to hire me. It turned out to be a lie. Human Resources Departments are looking for strong people. Not for nerds who memorized tons of useless data.
I would advise every student to keep attending a gym or singing classes, etc. Because those activities make man stronger. On the other side a homework will just eat precious time not giving much in return.
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Does student need to study hard?
When I was student I thoughtI would advise every student to keep attending gym or singing classes
[1] You are talking about the past, so keep it in the past.
[2] "etc" (an abbreviation of "et cetera") means "and other things", so it does not require a comma, although it is true that the majority of people nowadays do use a comma before it.
[3] This is a subordinate clause and it answers the previous clause. It should be preceded by a comma not a full stop/period.
[4] You are implying "men" in the plural.
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Does student need to study hard?
When I was a student I thought I'll had to study hard then I'll would find a good job and employers will be happy to hire me. It turned out to be a lie. Human Resources Departments are looking for strong people. Not for nerds who memorized tons of useless data.I would advise every student to keep attending a gym or singing classes, etc. Because those activities make people man stronger. On the other side hand a homework will just eat waste your precious time not giving much in return.
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