The adolescent
Maybe some people think the adolescent is bad and insurgent by age, but I think this is incorrect because when the young is loved, listened and guided for the correct way, they will be asome.
The problem is the adults because we think more in the material things, in work and work for more money and we don't know what is the reality.
We are question,
why the adolescent are in drugs?
why the adolescent are pregnant in early age?
we could questioning is probably some things are our foul.
The adolescent will be the future in this word, why not cared.
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The adolescent
Maybe some people think the adolescent is bad and rebellious because of his age, but I think this is incorrect because when the young people are loved, listened to and guided for the correct way, they will be awesome.The problem is that because as adults we think more about the material things, in work and working for more money, and we don't know what is their reality is.
We are question why the adolescent is into drugs or why the adolescent is pregnant at an early age.
We could questioning if probably some things are our fault.
The adolescent will be the future in this world, why not care.?
Note The sentence that starts "We question why" is more of a statement than an actual question so I probably would not use a question mark.
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The Adolescent
Maybe some people think that adolescence is a bad and unruly by age, but I think this is incorrect because when the young are loved, listened to and guided for the correct way, they will be awesome. (Awesome is very informal. It would be used in conversation or a message to a friend, but not in any type of formal writing.)The problem is with the adults because we think more in the material things; we work and work for more money and we don't know what is the reality is.
We ask,
Why are adolescents are into drugs?
Why are adolescents are pregnant at an early age?
We could questioning is probably some things are our foul. (Not sure what you mean here. Maybe: Some of these things are probably our fault.)
The adolescents will be the future of this world, why not cared so we should care about them.
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