The Football Village.Chapter 31. Not one step back.
So we'll face with two hard matches befor the season is over. We have to earn at least four points in these games. These days we degan to work hard at our trainings. Even our drunkards finished to booze and start to work. Well, Billy's appearance changed the atmosphere. Rod is the great captain, but he couldn't manage alone.
In several days we'll play with Darry Town FC. They were fiveth in the league table so the game will be difficult. For all season we played from the deffence. But then we must go ahead.
"Not one step back" that what we heard from Rod a few minutes before the game began...
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The Football Village.Chapter 31. Not one step back.
So we'll face with two hard matches (1)befor the season is over. We have to earn at least four points in these games. (2)These days we (3) degan to work hard at our (4)trainings. Even our drunkards finished (5)to booze and (6)start to work. Well, Billy's appearance changed the atmosphere. Rod is (7)the great captain, but he couldn't manage alone.In several days we'll play with Darry Town FC. They were(8) fiveth in the league table so the game will be difficult. For (9)all season we played from the (10)deffence. But(11) then we must go ahead.
"Not one step back" (12)that what we heard from Rod a few minutes before the game began...
Issues marked with bright yellow are of critical importance and faded yellow of less.
1. Spelling mistake : Before
2.Feels unnatural, rather use Lately
3. Spelling mistake : Began
4. Use singular form : Trading
5. booze isn't a verb,it's a noun so use the booze instead.
6. Incorrect word form, use Started
7. use a instead, ''Rod is a great captain."
8. Spelling mistake : Fifth
9. Feels unnatural, rather use "the entire".
10. Spelling mistake : defense.
11. Use "now" instead otherwise the sentence makes little sense.
12. "That is what", missing "is".
Good work, besides for the above stated issues.
Well done
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