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我嘅琴日小事 大家好,我琴日同friend一齊去屋企附近嘅公園,好多人玩緊pokemon,我嘅friend都係,不過我冇玩,我見到嗰度有隻貓仔就喵喵聲嘅同佢玩,冇注意周圍,突然我嘅friend大聲叫我,我先發現有一個遊民行近我,我就快啲走,當時淨係少少覺得怪,唔會好驚,我嘅friend仲扮惡保護我,好彩嗰個遊民冇追過來,之後回想,可能嗰隻貓仔係佢嘅friend,佢想保護佢嘅friend就似我嘅friend想保護我。提醒大家要注意安全,即使係人多嘅地方都要小心啲。

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我琴日嘅(一件)小事         兩個“嘅”就太重複了哦,口語一般不這樣說的~ 

大家好,我琴日同friend一齊去屋企附近嘅公園,好多人玩緊pokemon,我嘅friend都係,不過我冇玩,我見到嗰度有隻貓仔就喺度
喵喵聲咁叫,所以我就同佢玩,冇注意周圍,突然我嘅friend大聲叫我,我先發現有一個遊民行近我,我就快啲好快咁走左,當時淨係少少覺得覺得有少少怪,唔會好驚,我嘅friend仲扮惡保護我,好彩嗰個遊民冇追過來,之後回想,可能嗰隻貓仔係佢嘅寵物,佢想保護佢嘅寵物就好似我嘅friend想保護我一樣。提醒大家要注意安全,即使特別係人多嘅地方一定要小心啲。

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我嘅琴日嘅小事

大家好,我琴日同friend一齊去屋企附近嘅公園,好多人玩緊pokemon,我嘅friend都係,不過我冇玩,我見到嗰度有隻貓仔就喵喵聲嘅咁同佢玩,冇注意周圍,突然我嘅friend大聲叫我,我先發現有一個遊民行近我,我就快啲走,當時淨係少少覺得怪,唔會好驚,我嘅friend仲扮惡保護我,好彩嗰個遊民冇追過來,之後回想,可能嗰隻貓仔係佢嘅friend,佢想保護佢嘅friend就似我嘅friend想保護我。提醒大家要注意安全,即使係人多嘅地方都要小心啲。
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唔使客气~最紧要系你要成日讲广东话先得,斋学语法无咩实际效果。
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嘩! 你好,我都識客家話,我係客家人喔,多謝你的建議囉~
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台湾的朋友你好~既然你有中文基础,我建议你不要拘泥于学习粤语字。多看看港产片,多煲TVB剧,多听粤语歌,多跟会粤语的人交流,很快就很说粤语的。我的母语是客家话,但是长年累月受TVB和港产片耳濡目染,基本上粤语都是第二母语了。

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