The Olimpics in Rio
Do you watch The Olimpics in Rio?
These is a question that you can hear these days.
The Olimpics are present the stage on which athlets from all parts of the world represent and show their sport's skills.
The olimpics medal is very valauable.
To earn it, athlet needs prepare him self intesivly. His life needs subordinate to the sport which he engage in.
That means, every day training and special nutrition. In short, a lot of discipline and self denial.
Athlet needs to time his form/condition (?) for the day of competition. He needs to show the best he knows.
If he make a mistake, chance for a correction is in for years.
The life of a athlets can be a motivation for all us to do big things in our lives.
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The Olympics in Rio
Do you watch The Olympics in Rio?TheseThis is a question that you can hear these days.
The Olimpics are present the provide a stage on which athletes come from all parts of the world to represent their countries and show their sport's skills compete in various sports.
The An Olympic medal is very valuable.
To earn it one, an athlete needs to prepare himself intensively. His life needs subordinate to the sport which he engage in. The sport he engages in must dominate his life.
That This means every day daily training and special nutrition. In short, a A lot of discipline and self denial is required.
An athlete needs to time his form/condition (?) for be in top condition on the day of competition. He needs to show the best he knows.
If he makes a mistake, his chance for a correction redemption is in four years.
The life of an athlete can be a motivation for motivate all us to do big things in our lives.
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Nice job Gabrijel! I made a few bigger changes to reflect how I might say this in American English. If you have any questions about why I changed anything, please send me a message!
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The Olympics in Rio
Do you watch The Olympics in Rio?This is a question that you hear these days.
The Olympics are present the stage on which athletes from all parts of the world represent their country and show their sport's skills.
The Olympics medal is very valuable.
To earn it, an athlete needs to prepare himself intensively. His personal life needs to be subordinate to the sport which he engage in.
That means every day training and special nutrition. In short, a lot of discipline and self denial.
The athlete needs to time his form/condition (?) for the day of competition ???? not sure what you mean????. He needs to perform his best. ??? not really sure where either??? - lo siento/sorry
If he or she makes a mistake, the chance to correct it is years away.
The life of an athlete can be a motivation for all us to do big things in our lives.
Nice topic. Well done. I was a bit unsure of how to help you in the last paragraph.
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The Olimpics in Rio (Olympics)
Do you watch The Olimpics in Rio? (Are you watching the Olympics in Rio?)These is a question that you can hear these days. (This is a question that we hear a lot recently)
The Olimpics are present the stage on which athlets from all parts of the world represent and show their sport's skills. (The Olympics showcase athletes from all over the world, who represent their counties and show their sports
The olimpics medal is very valauable. (An Olympic medal is very valuable)
To earn it, athlet needs prepare him self intesivly. (In order to earn it, the athlete needs intense preparation)
His life needs subordinate to the sport which he engage in. (His lifestyle needs to support the sport he takes part in)
That means, every day training and special nutrition. (This means, training every day and maintaining a healthy diet)
In short, a lot of discipline and self denial. (In short, it takes a lot of discipline and motivation)
Athlet needs to time his form/condition (?) for the day of competition. He needs to show the best he knows.
If he make a mistake, chance for a correction is in for years. (The athlete has to be prepared and in good condition for the competition. He needs to be the best he can be. If he isn't, his next chance isn't for another four years)
The life of a athlets can be a motivation for all us to do big things in our lives. (The life of an athlete can be an inspiration, motivating us all to do big things in our lives)
I could understand this fine! So well done!
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