Financial Crisis
The global economy is on decline. So is mine.
I have unfortunately run out of my money, but the tragedy just begins.
All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.
I think it's probably high time to give myself a new name.
If the emotional cycle really exists, I would be standing at the rock bottom.
Tommorrow I will read another article on the Econimist, sacrificing millions of brain cells.
I need to go out for some fresh air, have a nice dream, then embrace the dawn, gathering myself, with a heart full of hope.
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Financial Crisis
The global economy is on in decline/on the decline. So is mine.I have unfortunately run out of my money, but the tragedy just begins.
All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.
I think it's probably high time to give myself a new name.
If the emotional cycle really exists, I would be am standing at the rock bottom*.
Tommorrow I will read another article on in the Economist, sacrificing millions of brain cells.
I need to go out for some fresh air and have a nice dream. Then, I will embrace the dawn and gathering myself, with a heart full of hope.**
*Both verbs "exists" and "am" should match in present tense. You could also say, "If the emotional cycle really existed, I would be standing at rock bottom."
**This last sentence was a bit awkward as one whole sentence.
Good luck, Oliver. Best to you.
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