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There was a funny story. My friend had a fight with a lady this morning. That lady wanted to paste a post on the window. My friend would tear if she pasted. Then that lady was so angry and said my friend wanted to kill her and hit her. Then they fought with words. She called police. And police came. She told police my friend will kill her and hit her. That police laughed. Because my friend is a lady and very skinny. How could she will kill her. Police just warned my friend. No any other results and bad things coming. I just feel that lady has problem with her brain.
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Correct pls
There was a funny story. My friend had a fight with a lady this morning. That lady wanted to paste a post on the window. My friend would tear if she pasted. Then that lady was so angry and said my friend wanted to kill her and hit her. Then they fought with words. She called police. And police came. She told police my friend will kill her and hit her. That police laughed. Because my friend is a lady and very skinny. How could she will kill her. Police just warned my friend. No any other results and bad things coming. I just feel that lady has problem with her brain.A funny thing happened today. My friend had a fight with a lady earlier this morning. The lady wanted to paste something on a window. My friend said she would tear it down if she did post it. The lady was so angry by that remark and started saying my friend wanted to hurt her. They argued about this and eventually the police were called. The lady told the police my friend threatened to kill her. The officer laughed because my friend is a very small person. There is no way she could hurt anyone! The police gave my friend a warning and nothing more. I feel this lady has some kind of problem.
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hahah.. Crazy world.
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Correct pls
There was a funny story. My friend had a fight with a lady this morning. That lady wanted to paste a post on the window. My friend said that she would tear it down if she pasted/put it up. Then that lady was so angry, and said my friend wanted to kill her and hit her. Then they argued/fought with words. She called the police. and [police]/they came. She told the police that my friend will/wanted to kill her and hit her. That The police laughed. because my friend is a lady and very skinny. How could she will kill her ? The police just warned my friend. There weren't any other results and or bad consequences/[things coming]. I just feel that lady has a problem with/in her mind/brain.0
Correct pls
There was a funny story.> This is a funny story. My friend had a fight with a lady this morning. The lady wanted to paste a poster on a window. My friend said she would tear it down if she pasted it. Then the lady became so angry and said that my friend wanted to hit and kill her. Then they began to argue. The lady called police, and later the police came. She told the police that my friend wanted to kill her and hit her. The police officers laughed. This is because my friend is a small -sized, skinny lady. How could she will kill her, even she wanted to. Police just warned my friend.
No any other results and bad things coming. > Nothing happened after that
I think that lady has some kind of mental problem.
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Hello, Lilian.
Here's a funny story. My friend had a fight with a lady this morning. That lady wanted to paste a post on the window. My friend would tear if she pasted. Then that lady became so angry and said my friend wanted to kill her and hit her. Then they fought with words. She called the police. And the police came. She told the police my friend was going to kill her and hit her. Those police laughed, because my friend is a lady and very skinny. How could she will kill her? The police just warned my friend. No any other results or bad things coming. I just feel that lady has problem with her brain.Missing articles are in black.
Tense mistakes are in orange.
Poor choice of word are in yellow.
Sentence structure mistakes (punctuation, capitalization, clause structure) are in cyan blue.
Singular/plural mistakes are in pink.
Hope this helped. :)
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