holidays
I feel like to be on holidays, I need to meet new people, do different things and visit other places. These kinds of activities often help us charge energy for the next work or study time.
Also, being on holidays sometimes lets us be able leave negative thinkings or replace incorrect ideas or feelings about something or someone.
Definitely, holidays are disconnection of your daily life, and a connecction with another new reality. There are few days for my holidays, at last!
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Holidays
I feel like to be I should be* on holidays: I need to meet new people, do different things and visit other places. These kinds of activities often help us recharge energy for the next work or study time.Also, being on holidays sometimes lets us be able leave negative thinkings {better: negative thoughts} or replace incorrect ideas or feelings about something or someone.
Definitely, {better: Clearly} holidays are a disconnection of from your daily life, and a connection with another (new) reality. Fortunately, {Luckily,} there are few days for my holidays coming up, at last!**
*I wasn't quite sure what you meant here. Are you saying that you like going (encantar) on holidays, that you like how you feel (sentirse) when you're on holiday, or that you *should be* (deber que hacer vacaciones) on holiday now?
**This last sentence was abrupt and unexpected with respect to the rest of the paragraph, so I added a transitional declaration (fortunately), and tied it into the earlier comments by introducing a time element (coming up) to create an overarching theme of how the topic of holidays applies to you.
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